Chapter 1: Little boy and his blue wagon Chapter 1

Status: Finished  |  Genre: Children Stories  |  House: Booksie Classic

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I am Jayden Siman, I live in north Callifornia, i am 8 years old and i have nor a friendship or love but rather an attachment, where i go it goes, my blue wagon, so small yet so big with endless possibilities it is my wing, it is my soul, it is me. I see children playing, singing, dancing, but why is it that i see no one? I mean i know that they exist yet i cant help to feel they are all gone, somewhere that can't be denied, they are surronded by friends family and love, but i sit here with my mother and fother screeming not trying to help each other when they fall but rather pushing them back down and even solving things by hitting or throwing objects.
I go to school with no ride or a friend to walk with just me and my blue wagon walking down the street its here when i need it when i am alone and sad I can always find my wagon in the bin where i have left it and i hope that it may never leave or turn to rust to leave me alone and to make me feel as if I am the only one to exist in this world every one else is in a seperate world,universe, and sometimes demention. They see me but i ignore i am just the kid with the wagon and they see me as a creep or a weirdo with no life.
As school begins the teacher questions me on what i did last night, I answer \"I played with my friend, and we laughed all day\" my teach was named Miss.Augustus she knew i was lying by the way i said it in a monotone voice. She pulled a ruler out and began to messure my desk, I was stumbled and awkward with her hand moving closer to the edge of the desk as if it was going to fall and hit the ground with no gravity to support just more force to hit her hand, but as soon as she finished she saw my wagon sitting in the sandbox. She went outside and began to question me as to why i brought it to school I said \"I must have not noticed it in my hand\" with a smug look.

Submitted: October 11, 2009

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Smiley Sophia

very well done Joel!

Mon, October 12th, 2009 12:49am



Sun, October 11th, 2009 9:19pm


wow. i never read anything like this on booksie. its very deep. sorta deppresing as well. i sorta relate to that lil kid. plz do keep me posted when u update this. this was brilliant

Mon, October 12th, 2009 2:27am


wow thank you very much

Sun, October 11th, 2009 9:19pm

Insane Membrane

nice work , do a spell check and tidy it up ....please it will read so much better then

Sat, April 28th, 2012 7:05am

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