Chapter 4 (v.1)
Well, I shrugged, I was sure to run into some sometime, and why not now, while it was light out and I could at least have a chance of spotting them from a good ways off.When night fell, it would be dark and weak as I was, I would need to sleep.At least in the house I could fort up, lock myself in the most secure room and hope for the best while I slept.Standing, I slipped on the backpack and gathered my rifle and shotgun and struck out for the barn.
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As I read this I kept thinking, "Oh I hadn't considered that." It was nice to have the paced slowed down for a bit and as always lots of really good detail. Nice chapter.
Ok, I do have one question that keeps wiggling around in the back of my head. In the first chapter (I think) when he went home and found his wife transformed, he took care fo her, but never went to check on the baby because he couldn't bear what he might find. If I was him I'd be second guessing myself. "What if the child was ok, was hiding, and I left it there?" Is that issue ever touched on?
You know I'm finding that I don't like to read novels here because its hard getting into it on the computer. This is the exception to that though. It keeps me coming back.
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