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“Hey dude what happened earlier?” Nimaka suddenly asked “I mean you like stared at the tornado cabin and walked straight into a door! wait you've not got a...” “Shut up Nimaka!” I retorted. We were on our way to school and saw kai and boomer from the shadow cabin. They came an sat behind us. “What do you want you shadow shits,” Nimaka practically spat. “Nothing fruit head!” He pathetically tried to come back. Where he lacked in ... everything... well thats it! he fluncked everything bar sex-ed. Suddenly the door opened. Metal cabin. Next stop tornado then light. The bus jerked as the heavy mechanics jumped in. *** “Class dismissed... exept nimaka and raina!” Mrs. Senstara yelled. She was our 23 year old maths hoe... i mean teacher. Luckily she just wanted some help with the maths. As me and nimaka are the best at that we always get asked. The last day at school this term was today so we got to watch reaper...todays version of saw. *** “Hey raina why do you keep looking at the psychic and wind hut. i hear you call them tornado's?” Nimaka asked outside. “N-no reason! j-just curious!” I ranted.
Submitted: April 23, 2012
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Very nice! I can picture this in Manga already, I'm sort of an anime artist myself, so I know the feeling, hehe. Anyways, keep up the good work :)
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Riley Raine
You are getting better with your work..........keep it coming........I WANT MORE!!!!!!! Haha jk......but seriously......keep up the good work and keep me updated
Tue, April 24th, 2012 2:17pmAuthor
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kk thanks!
Tue, April 24th, 2012 1:25pm