We have just broken up and I do not know what to do
My head is spinning with all these thoughts of you,
It’s a long way the two of us have come
Better days we have seen but it seems you recall none,
I lay here in bed listening to the rain
The angels are crying because my heart is in pain,
My dreams have been shattered and there is a hole in my chest
How will I tonight put my mind to rest?
I try and I try searching for ways to get you back
But I am so unstable I keep falling off track,
I really do want this more than you know
I’m begging for you to stay and not let me go,
I have no idea how life without you will be
I always seen a future with you and me,
Now this dream has sadly come to an end
All alone with a heart only one person can mend,
It’s like my world has fallen and there is no hope
A life now without you, how will I cope?
The way that I’m feeling I cannot really explain
A part of you is missing but my love will remain.
Submitted: October 06, 2013
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Comments
I agree with daddy it should be 'part of me' x) And hey great poem I've been through a heartbreak with my first love and heck it was terrible... but things get better so don't be so down :)
Mon, October 7th, 2013 6:13am
well done. you've conveyed the feeling well. thanks for sharing :) p.s line 14...should that be "I've" instead of "I"?
Fri, October 11th, 2013 6:33pm
Thanks guys... I'm new to this so still learning,
but thanks for the tips. Appreciate it. :)
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daddydoyle
good poem bud,very similar to some of my own.
Sun, October 6th, 2013 7:54pmi think the last line should read, a part of ME is missing. its not a criticism just an observation,,good job.