Chaos and Order

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This is a novel I am working on called Chaos and Order. It is the story of a man with schizophrenia attempting to find out information about his nameless gay lover that he often sees and speaks about in his dreams.

Chapter 1 (v.1) - Chaos and Order

Submitted: July 11, 2012

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Submitted: July 11, 2012




Those words were still there, those chilling words I wrote on the walls. I remember them clearly, making the cold concrete warehouse seem all too familiar. New York, cold as hell, and there I was, still there since new years, and the end of January had crept its ugly head in, and no progress, nothing. I think those words were starting to mock me.

I couldn't stand it anymore, I couldn't bear to be in my own company. Sitting there mocking myself, while the half-finished blue prints on the desk stared back like a piece of unfinished art. "This is why I'm not making any progress! I can't think in here!" I sat there baffled at my ability to drive myself mad. "As If I had been in a state of sanity before all this started." I scoffed at my own words. "Sanity is overrated."

The plans had been in the making for a long time. The longer I looked at them the angrier I became. Why bother with plans at all? I never worried with them before. "Because, this time will be different!" I flung the papers off the desk in anger as I yelled, trying to catch my breath. "This time, will make all the difference."

The words echoed in my head as I stood there looking at the now bare desk. I could feel the laughter building inside me. I couldn't contain myself, it belted out of me in loud, painful bursts. "This time will be different!” I fell to my knees in joy and agony. The hairs on the back of my neck stood up, and it was then that I realized what I was doing. "No, I need to concentrate, work now, play later." I was talking to myself again, but that was okay, I enjoyed it. So it was back to my desk again to finish what I had started. I was too deep in by this point to pull back, and so I worked in silence for several more hours, before my tired eyes finally got the best of me.

When I awoke it was raining again, and the sound of raindrops pouring down on the roof caught my attention lifting me from my state of sleep. The ruffled papers beneath me showed some resemblance to the blue prints I had been working on the night before. With tired eyes I shifted them aside and raised my head. Long locks of red fell against my shoulders as I stretched my neck, allowing it to crack. "Well these will be of little use now, won’t they?" I said to myself as I picked up the drool stained blueprints and tossed them to the opposite side of the room. "God forbid I actually get any work done."

I was angry, no matter what I did I couldn't concentrate. I ended up drifting off, or moving to other tasks, occasionally looking down to find I had invaded my blue prints with drawings of him. He knew how to get to me, even in my seclusion.

The hands on the clock above me seemed to be moving too fast. Perhaps my mind was playing tricks on me, it liked to do that. Once again I found myself losing concentration. Focusing my time on how well the clock did its job, instead of doing mine.

Forcing myself to concentrate was really taking its toll on me. Even through the hair which hung over my face, I was certain, the bags were visible. That night was the first time in a long time I found myself making use of the bed in the other room. The weeks of sleeping at my desk were finally catching up to me.

That night I had a dream. It was the first dream I had in a long time. I could see his face as clear as day. He smiled at me and I knew I smiled back. I gently kissed his lips and his eyes met mine. My beard tickled his cheek as we embraced and he chuckled.

Perhaps it was a memory rather than a dream. It had crossed my mind many times, each encounter with it seemed more vivid. It was times like that when I wished I could tell the difference. When I wished that my own body hadn’t turned on me so harshly. I had just been released six months prior. Schizophrenia, bi polar disorder; before then, they were just words. It wasn’t until they started taking their toll on me did I realize the situation I was in. 

Was the man in my dreams someone I once knew, or was he simply another figure of my imagination? In my dreams I heard him calling my name. He’d whisper to me, “I love you Marcus.” I would always smile, sigh, and look into his eyes, then I would whisper “I love you too.”

There was never a name, I knew him only as the beautiful blonde man in my dreams. As much as he knew me, I knew nothing beyond the feel of his skin, and the look in his eyes as they met mine. When I was in the Asylum they told me I spoke to him in my dreams. They’d ask me who he was, but I never could tell them. It’s impossible to tell a truth, that you, yourself is not even aware of.

That is where the blue prints were to come in. Two months in the making, and all for what? Simply put, “To find an answer.” I looked at them once more and laughed to myself.
“All this to find a man that may not even exist, you’re a fool.” I slammed my fist on the desk and sighed. “He does exist, I know he does,” but as always myself answered back, “What if you’re wrong.”

The plan was simple; I would draw up the blueprints of the Asylum as well as I could remember it, I would use every memory I had to make it as accurate as possible, when that was done it would be time to choose the point of entrance. From there I would use the blue prints to help me sneak inside, and make my way to the file room. From there I would locate my interviews, my recordings, every one from every doctor. I would gather everything they made me leave behind, and take what was rightfully mine. Maybe I left myself a clue, or maybe I was really as crazy as they said.

The security was tight, there were guards in every hall, locked doors around every corner, cameras in every nook and cranny. The blueprints were the only way I could see, the only way I could visualize what I was trying to do, and the easiest part of what I was trying to accomplish, was the only thing I couldn’t wrap my head around. “Why does it have to be this hard!” I screamed. Another night gone by so quickly, and still so much work to be done. I needed a break. I turned my head and looked at the words on the wall once again, there they were, there they had been for so many years, a constant memory of why I come back to this place. If ever there was a bigger reason to understand the man in my dreams, there it sat, a constant reminder of why I’m doing this. Maybe one day to hear those words outside of my dream, to know the one who speaks them so clearly when I sleep. “I love you Marcus.”





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