Chapter 1: you're mine forever and always

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Chapter 1

I open my eyes it was incredibly dark I was laying on the floor.  I tried to move my hands but they were tied together I yanked but It only sent pain threw my arms. “Don’t pull it only makes them hurt more.” I looked in the direction the voice came from I was imminently met by my number one enemy my kidnapper.

“Wh…where am I?” those were the only words that came to mine. “You’re with me and you’re safe.” He started to walk towards me. I attempted to move back but it was a fail. “Don’t hurt me please…… I’ll do whatever you want please!” I started sobbing he didn’t listen he just kept coming closer. “You need some sleep” he said then the familiar clean smell filled my nose then darkness. My mind started remembering the last day’s events they were crystal clear never to be removed from my memory.

I was in my room preparing for bed I had my face cleansing mask on I walk to my bathroom and washed it off I went to grab a towel but instead I had a face full of chloroform the last thing I heard was “ Good night my princess next time you awake we’ll be together” Then darkness.

I re awoke still on the ground but my hands were free I imminently back against the wall and brought my knees to my chest. “Princess your awake, how are you feeling? “He asked I looked up it was brighter now I could see him. He was sitting in a chair across from me. That was the only other thing in this room not even a window. He was at least 6’3 piercing blue eyes, tanned and had rippling muscles he could easily kill me. I pushed the thought out of my mind “Who are you? What do you want from me? Where am I?” I asked “Hold on one question at a time. First my name is Jake” he walked towards me “Don’t hurt me” I screamed “calm down I won’t touch you I promise you Hailey.” My body froze and sent a chill down my back “h…how do you know my name? What do you want from me’’ I screamed I held in my tears staring straight at him. “Now you asked me a question and I answered now answer mine.” Jake said. I just stared at him I wasn’t going to give him anything. We stared at each other for at least an hour he was the first to break” Fine I’ll come back when you are ready to talk.” With that he walked away opened the door shut it then I heard a click the worst sound you could ever hear. He didn’t come back it was freezing on the floor I was also hungry. How long has it been since I ate? Why me I was an average 13 year old I was in 8th grade. I had dirty blonde hair I usually wore in a ponytail, I was barley 5 foot, and my favorite part about me my hazel eyes my mom once told me only a few lucky people get two eye colors. My mom what was she thinking when she came to wake me up? I finally fell asleep dreaming of school my best friends Aundria and Paige along the guy I had the biggest crush on Nick.  I woke up multiple times it was dark and Jake still wasn’t here. I was awoken by Jake “Good morning princess” “Hi” I said as I looked up at him Jake was shocked that I talked. “Are you going to cooperate today?” “Yes” I mumbled “Don’t mumble when you talk to me!’’ He yelled “Now are you going to cooperate today?” “Yes sir” I said “that’s my good girl” he said with a smile. “I knew one night down here would change things from yesterday. How are you feeling?’’ seriously he was asking me this after he drugged me twice left me down here and if I forgot to mention kidnapped me?!  I just shook my head and started to cry Jake started to walk towards me “shhh its ok I won’t hurt you” he said I had my face buried in my knees. He crouched down to me “Do you like it down here?” “No sir” “I didn’t think so” he held out his hand I took it and he helped me up “where are we going?” “Do you want to stay down here?” I shook my head.” Then follow me” “what are you going to do to me?” “Nothing.” “Then why did you take me?” I yelled he grabbed my other arm and held me against the wall “Hailey I told you I wouldn’t hurt you. I took you because I love you.” I didn’t do anything after that I just stood there. “Are you ok princess?” I shook my head he let my arms down and took my hand and lead me to the door. He opened the door and led me through to a small kitchen. There was a small table with only two chairs how convenient. He pulled out one and I sat and put my head on the table. “Do you want food? Water you need to drink something.  He walked away but then came back “Don’t get any funny ideas there are no windows and the all the doors are locked.” Then he was gone. He came back with a glass of water and a sandwich “eat” he said. I didn’t I had no clue what he might have done to it. I didn’t want him to put something in it knock me out then rape me without knowing it. I looked at him then stared at the floor. “I see what the problem is” he said then he left. When he came back he had a bottle of orange juice he set it in front of me I didn’t think twice I grabbed it. I tried to get the cap off but I was so weak how long has it been? I just set it down “here” Jake said I popped the cap off and handed it to me as he sat down in the chair next to me. “Thank you” I said not daring to look up. “Let’s talk my princess” he said.

***Authors note :)***

Hey ya’ll this is my first time writing I love kidnapped stories so I was like hey why not write my own so with a couple of clicks here it is please comment I won’t bite good and bad just no nasty words!!!!  

Submitted: April 14, 2012

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Rogue Writer

yo i LOVE stories about kidnappings toon they are so interesting! iti was really good keep writing

Sat, April 14th, 2012 1:56am



Fri, April 13th, 2012 8:08pm


Thanks for support may update later tonight :)

Sat, April 14th, 2012 1:59am


This is really good :-D i was expecting the girl to be a little older but its great :-)

Sat, April 14th, 2012 2:22am


Well I based it off me even thoe my names not hailey she's a friend but thanks for the support :)

Fri, April 13th, 2012 7:23pm


looks amazing and interesting! KMU!

Sat, April 14th, 2012 2:42am


Thanks np might update tonight kind excited about it!

Fri, April 13th, 2012 7:44pm


it sounds amazing so far! soo addicted i luv kidnapped stories so urs is #1!!!

Tue, April 17th, 2012 3:53am


Awwww thanks :)

Mon, April 16th, 2012 8:54pm


Very nice work!

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 5:13pm


thank you :)

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 4:09pm


It's really good so far. I just have one question: where did he find a house with no windows?

Fri, May 11th, 2012 1:02am


Thanks lol I have no idea lol he boarded them up!

Thu, May 10th, 2012 6:07pm


Hi please read my two new books well their both only one chapter for now. But i need to decide which one is better. So please read it. The first one is called Vengeance is deadly. (With a dot)and the next is the choices we make.

Sat, July 21st, 2012 4:16am


cool story! love kidnap stories!

Sun, November 17th, 2013 1:59am

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