Submitted: March 13, 2011
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nice poem! I like to write the funny stuff.
Come over and has a laugh on old Cap-pin Mike
and I'll dig'z in mee'z pocket for sum-pin yaz like!
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Thank, and I'll have a look see, yeah.
Sun, March 13th, 2011 7:46am
Nice ... In the end, everything is just like the sandcastle: existing only for a short while before fading away into eternity.
Sun, March 13th, 2011 5:24pm
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Wow, thanks, you're good at interpreting stuff, haha
Sun, March 13th, 2011 1:28pm
Wow, Kurlz you are one talented fish! I love this poem. Awesome how its just a sandcastle aye :) keep up the amazing writing.
Sun, March 13th, 2011 7:35pm
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Haha, thanks you very much. Yeah, a sandcastle, whoa! I will keep it up! Just for you, haha, kidding.
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:D mad as poem :D i dont write poems i write storys :D but awesome poem mate u use good technique :D :D keep writing poems dont let anyone tell u otherwise :D
Sun, March 13th, 2011 4:31amAuthor
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Haha, thanks for the encouragement, I love writing, so it's good to hear stuff like that. :)
Sat, March 12th, 2011 8:34pm