Retishella and the Dolphins

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic

Retishella mermaid discovers that the only way to cure her of
her mystery illness is a trip across the ocean to find the Dolphin King.
The journey is a memorable one, where Retishella and her father encounter
kindness and brutality in equal measures from the sea creatures they meet
on the way.
But the most memorable part of the whole journey is Retishella's meeting
with the Dolphin King, an event she will always treasure
This story is inspired by many different things. By the
warnings I constantly give my own children about the dangers they may
encounter in the world (crossing the road for example); by the kindness of
one stranger and the brutality of another; and most of all by my frequent
walks on the beaches of Somerset, where I often wonder about the creatures
that live in the sea, not visible to the landish eye!

Chapter 1 (v.1) - Retishella and the Dolphins

Submitted: May 19, 2007

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Submitted: May 19, 2007



This is the opening page of Retishella and the Dolphins. I hope to upload the whole first chapter soon. 


Retishella mermaid was feeling strange. Not weird and wonderful strange like a trip to the zooquarium to see the seamagic show, or amazing strange like a brilliant birthday, but the kind of strange that gives you a bad stomach or an achy head. Ever since she lost her sister’s junkball in the stripweed bushes and had to search among the stinking blue weed to find it she had not felt quite right. She knew from her mother’s frequent warnings that it was not wise to go near the stripweed beds, but she hadn’t felt anything bite or sting her so she thought no more of it. Now she was feeling very peculiar indeed.

She wondered momentarily if this is what guilt felt like. Next time she would ask Seeley if she could play with her junkball.

She held out an arm and noticed that her smooth skin was starting to wrinkle up like the face of a wizened walrus. She looked down at her beautiful shiny tail and gasped. The silvery scales were swelling and had that pitted look like the skin of a pineapple.

 More worrying still was the fact that she couldn’t control the colour of her eyes and hair. This was particularly disturbing because a merperson with no control over their colour can’t show others how he or she is feeling. Her hair and eyes were changing from red to purple to blue to grey to green to yellow again and again, and it was making her feel quite dizzy. She leant on a seabed rock until the feeling passed.


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