Chapter 1: Will You Show?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Comments: 2


[IMG][/IMG] Adel
[IMG][/IMG] Snow
[IMG][/IMG] Ly
[IMG][/IMG] Luna

Adle bent down closing her bright grey eyes. She purposely closed them so no one would notice her in the dark. The only thing that would mabey show her identity in the dark would be her blue fur mixed with the black midnight fur. A nose came out of no where in the dark distance. She noticed right away when he came out and poked her that it was her friend Ly. Adle jumped back behind the nearest tree quickly pulling him back with her. Adle kept quiet while Ly kept poking her shoulder to see if she would notice her. Ly was the same kind of wolf as she was. the only thing difference about Ly and her was he had bright blue eyes that sparkled in the night.

"Are you trying to get us killed!?", Adle snarled. Ly shut up right away looking down. When the coast was clear, they both walked out from behind the tree. Adle pointed to her right side showing Ly the deer she saw. They both looked at each other then took off running at there pray. When they got close to the deer, it was not their pray. A guard popped out as they thought that he was there pray but they were wrong. The hunter smiled holding a gun up to them, he had a gun in both of his hands. The guard said a word and snapped having guards come out and surround the two.

"Come on!", the guards said pulling them by there ears back into the dark halls of the mental hospital they lived in. They put them back into the room where Snow and Luna was waiting in knowing they were going to get caught. They guards closed the door as they both smirked looking at Adle and Ly. "Wheres my deer!", Snow said then fell on the bed with Luna as they laughed hard until there heads started hurting. Adle snarled at them going to bed with Ly after pushing them off the only bed they all had to share. Ly walked by Snow and Luna to go to bed, he smacked them accrost the heads as Snow snarled while Luna fell over rubbing her fragile head.

Submitted: April 21, 2012

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Nora Yang Hitatori

I love it, even for your first storie you are writing its good and one thing I have to say though stop putting To Be Continued.... :) Now should post your eight other chpaters.... I want chapter nine... XD you gotta love me leeshy I love your book so far and really happy you got the first chapter on here.. Great job -laughs evily- XD XP :) :D
Gotta love me
-Hidden Snow- (nora yang)

Tue, May 1st, 2012 2:40pm


I can't help it its a habit to put to be continued

Sun, July 29th, 2012 8:58pm


im now here as requested by a friend..
ok.. nice start for your story.. im hoping to see improvements on the next chapters.. keep writing :)

Sat, May 5th, 2012 2:54am

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