Chapter 4:

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Comments: 3

It's 15 minutes to 6 and I can hear the doorbell. I know I may sound ridiculous when I say this, but I think can actually feel him.... or maybe it was because I saw him from my window. Either way I know we're meant to be.

I take the stairs two steps at a time secretly hoping that I don't fall flat on my face, Now wouldn't that be something!!!

Anyway, I land safe and sound and right in time for the second ring, I open the door and there he was, in all his glory, my samuel. I know it's still a tad bit early to call him my samuel but it won't be long now.

"Hey" He said, even his voice is mesmerizing

"Hey back" lame

"You look amazing" that dazzling smile again

"OH this??"I point to my outfit,"It was just something I put on" .. yeah right, rather perfectly sculpted in the last hour.... if you don't know it yet... beauty is not easy!

"Let's go, we don't wanna be late"

"Yeah we wouldn't want that" otherwise J would be pissed but I kept that part to myself

Mom was in the kitchen the whole time and so vey girly like I yelled my head off just to tell her that we were leaving

"Ok Sam, Have fun"

I close the door behind us and get in the car with Samuel. Now I dont' know anything about cars so don't even try asking. All I know is that it's red and shiny and that I LOVE IT!!!

"Do you like my car?" He said pointing to it

"It's amazing!" just like you... also kept that part to myself

"So hop in"

I got in the car and it only took us like five minutes to get to the coffee place where we were supposed to meet Justin. The whole ride I was so focused on Samuel that I forgot to say anything, oh well.... better luck next time

Samuel parked in front of the shop and opened the door for me in a very gentleman-like manner. I took a deep-breath knowing full well what lay ahead of me... a long loooooong spanish-enquisition-like meeting with J

As soon as we got in, I heard my name being called and sure enough it was Justin, waving his hand off. But as soon as he spotted Samuel, the waving stopped abruptly

'what's going on?'

We headed over to the table where I handled the introductions

"Samuel, this is Justin, my best friend since forever" "Justin, this is Samuel, my new neighbour" I wanted to say 'and boyfriend' but I still had to find out about that

Samuel said a very sweet, "Hi", while all I could hear from Justin were stutters, starting from his very subtle, "H..H...Hiii"

2 hours later

I was right about the long night but totally not what I expected. Instead of an inquisitive Justin he was mostly silent and when he was able to speak all you could hear were casual stutters

"Me... I.... I mean...." and that went on forever

I was actually worried about him, I will call him to check up on him later. Right now, I was in the car with Samuel enjoying the summer breeze. I should say something though

"I'm sorry about Justin. He wasn't his usual self today"

"It's ok." Damn him for smiling like that

then he added, "He was.....nice"

Ok.... weird was the adjective best suitable at this situation... but nice? I think not

"yeah..... he was probably just..... I don't even know what he was but I hope it wasn't too awkward"

"No I actually enjoyed it" He said smiling ever more reassuringly, "It was fun"

I decided to end at that note. He didn't seem bothered by the fact that my friend went a bit wacko, who was I to question him?

Still.... I wonder what was up with Justin

Submitted: July 24, 2009

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THIS IS REALLLY GOOOD!!!! WHY DIDN'T YOU UPDATE?? PLZ UPDATE!!!:(:( AND if you have the time check my novel

i know you're not over her but you will love me

long name but great story!!!

Tue, September 22nd, 2009 7:57pm


I've started to read your story and I think it's pretty cool :D
Thanks for the comment, I'm about to update with 2 chapter or so :) Hope you like it :)

Fri, September 25th, 2009 8:15am


lol, is J gay?

Sun, September 27th, 2009 6:57am


maybe...maybe not :D mwahahaha :D

Sun, September 27th, 2009 1:07pm


I LOVE that J is overprotective, like an older brother. I am starting to think that maybe he doesn't want girl Sam but that perhaps he's gay. I guess I'll just have to read on to find out :o)

Sat, October 3rd, 2009 10:35pm


yes, you will!

Sat, October 3rd, 2009 6:01pm

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