Trying To Make It Last

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

An erotic poem of love. For a special woman I know. :)

Friction burning the flesh,
As we move in such rhythm of our heartbeat
Overcome by
The pleasures of the moment we share.
Fiery love
Engulfing our souls and minds
Holding back
The explosive end that was near.
This wondrous sensation to last a moment longer.
Each nerve in the flesh
Igniting at once,
The feeling we both adore.
Sweat rolling down my brow,
While I hold back as long as I can.
Holding it! Holding it! Holding it!
Oh yes! Oh yes! Oh God Yes!
It’s over
Within a moment of release
Of my essence
Into her womb.

Submitted: June 03, 2008

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Tue, June 3rd, 2008 3:52am


Thanks for your comment. I am glad you like it.

Tue, June 3rd, 2008 6:47am

Lacey Cummings

Michael! I think you may have squeezed a blush out of me! I thought this was fantastic!! Who ever she is you'd better keep her around for all that inspiration.

Wed, June 4th, 2008 3:12am


Thanks LC I sure will. I never thought I could write things like this. It is amazing what happens when you find the right person to come into your life. :) I am glad you liked it.

Wed, June 4th, 2008 11:30am

Summer Rayne

I Loved It... Your A Fantastic Writer! =]

Sat, June 14th, 2008 1:39am


Thanks Thats means a lot to me. :)

Fri, June 13th, 2008 8:31pm


I love have a real talent. She must be a very special woman. :)

Tue, June 17th, 2008 12:21am


She was. But we broke up. :( I know that there is someone out there for me. I just have to be patient. I am glad that you like it. Thanks for the compliment.

Mon, June 16th, 2008 7:10pm

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