Chapter 1: Halo Phenomenon: Cirrus (Gist)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Halo Phenomenon: Cirrus
Synopsis:

As she lived her new life, the compassionate and lovely Angeline Monde enters college. Unexpectedly, she meets again her long lost best friends Xander Newell and Stephen Greiger. As she convenes them, she has to discover the new personalities of her friends especially Xander.

Xander , a lonesome and eerie named student in their school, is in search for his past and has secrets that he had never known for a long time. Until Angeline discovers that she has feelings to Xander but afraid to show it. She will be the one to unveil the enigmas on Xander - one was that Xander has the another identity in his own that he got after a tremendous accident. But in the long run, Angeline becomes inescapably in love not to Xander but to his immortal alter ego. Unknown, that there are drawbacks on their way to discover for more. How can love last to a mortal and an immortal? How long can they endure against all odds? And lastly, what will Angeline choose, the love of her life or the life of her love?

*it's my very first time to write a novel so please tell me what you can say about it.*


Submitted: February 05, 2010

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PaulChafer

As a premise, I think it will do well on here, depends upon how you develop the characters and the story as it unfolds, remember, show not tell and you'll be fine. I think it will be more for the teenager so not really the kind of thing I will read, but anytime you post a new poem, please update me. Good luck with the novel, being lazy is fine, success is a journey, why rush? You will only shake off the laziness once you find something in life which compels you to live it and breathe it. Good luck with that one;o)
Paul.

Tue, February 16th, 2010 6:22pm

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Of course I will. Thanks for that wonderful advice. You made me inspired by the way. As you said so, I'll update you if I posted a poem. Thanks also on commenting even though it's not a genre you deal with. Haha! ^_^

Wed, February 17th, 2010 10:12pm

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