Chapter 11:

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

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(MALPALLOVESTOWRITE HERE YOU ARE YAY and sry I haven’t put all you other future characters in yet. It’ll happen! B patient lol enjoy)
The next morning my mind woke up slooooowwwly. My eyes had been open for like, ten minutes before I noticed I was looking at something. It’s like I was..hell, I don’t know! It was so weird though.
And once I understood what I was looking at (my hand) and where it was (on a shirtless, tan, firm, muscular stomach) it took me ages to figure out what I was under.
A person.
A boy.
And even when I realized that I didn’t feel like moving. My body was like, floppy. Rubbery….idk, it was hard to move. But I could hear and stuff.
And I heard Alex speaking at me.
“….Dakooooootaaaaaaa wake uuupppp alreadyyyy!” he was moaning. Why? Was he in pain? Oh, he was bored.
“Dakkkooooooootttttttaaaaaaaaa come oooooooooooonnnn!!” his hand came up and patted my face as if he couldn’t tell what he was touching. He poked me in the eye.
It surprised me out of my haze and I accidentally spat on him.
“PPtooah” I said.
“What. Was. That.” Alex asked. I sat up.
“Did you just spit on me?!” I ignored him and got off the bed. I stumbled around like a lunatic, my head spinning. I hadhadhad to brush my teeth. Once that woke me up some more, the questions wracking my brain became first priority and I pounced on Alex. Who was still lying on my nice new bed. Shaking out his arm.
“ Alex, how Adalina? Why are you in my bed? What are you doing? Why are you always here? Where are Kian and Kellan and Keric and Kian’s mom and my mom? Who did that to Adalina? What day is it today? Where’s my phone? Why do my knees hurt so badly? Whoa, why do I keep getting dizzy? Why are you so freaking hot suddenly? And why--” I fell over, landing on my ass. “Ow.” Shit. What the hell is wrong with me? I can’t stop talking?
‘Shut!’ I told my mouth. ‘Stop! Be quiet!’
Alex smirked and smiled and snickered.
“You think I’m hot?” smug bastard.
“ Alex, I can’t stop! My mouth won’t stop f*cking moving I hate it when this happens god god god ugh--” the door swung open suddenly and collided with the side of my calf.
“OOOWWWWWWWW” I howled. I cut myself off, and was actually thankful for the pain. It made me able to. Stop. Talking.
“Oh, sorry, honey!! Hey, Alex! ” This short, pale girl with loooong brown hair came in. she was tiny and slim but probably still good with the guys because of her awesome curves. “Is Kellan in here? We’re playing hide and seek, see. And I can’t seem to find him anywhere! I’m Lala by the way. Yes, somebody actually named their kid la la. I know. So who are you? ” She giggled, beaming at me. I didn’t answer, scared to death of launching my mouth on another talking spree.
“ Uh, he’s not here, Lala. Go away.” Alex said rudely. But I think that was my fault. He was still in shock from my avalanche of questions.
“Oh,” the smile fell from her face and It looked like she was gonna cry. My heart wrenched and I shot Alex a look and the finger. I smiled at her.
“I like your name.” I whispered, and then clamped my mouth shut.
It was like the sun came out again. The smile returned to her face, brighter than ever and she just vibrated with positive attitude.
“Oh, THANK you!!!” then she spun around and skipped down the hall, singing angelically. I leaned, watching her go, mesmerized. What a strange human being. I like her.
“What the hell, Dakota? Why did you flip me off? I didn’t do anything!” Alex was still lounging on my bed when I turned to look at him.
“You were mean to her, Alex. That’s not nothing.” I said hesitantly, quietly.
“Really? You’re mad about that?” he smirked. Wtf douche.
“You can’t just be mean to people, Alex. Even if you think you’re better than them, at least try to hide it. You won’t make any friends being a pompous ass.” The smirk departed and I smiled inside. I win.
“So why are you always here?” I asked.
“Never-f*cking-mind, Dakota! That’s none of your f*cking business! Get the f*ck out of my sh*t! And take your f*cking gay assed phone!” He chucked it at me and I barely caught it before I slammed into my head. “It’s been vibrating all f*cking night and it’s driving me up the f*cking wall!” all during his little temper tantrum, he had been storming out of bed and to the door and now he slammed it shut behind him as if it was his. As if he lived here, not me.
I stared after him in shock, totally not expecting that at all.
I jumped when my ‘gay assed’ phone vibrated.
I looked at it. It was a text from ranger. The text was a question mark only. Hmm… I checked my inbox.
56 messages?!!?!? No way! I scrolled through them. Ranger, Ranger, no way! EVERY SINGLE ONE was from Ranger!! Every one!!! And I did not want to read them all. So I texted him.
‘Why did u send me 56 texts?’ I asked him, then went to put on a bra, not expecting the phone to vibrate right away. Which it did.
‘R u ok? Wat was w/ that text b4? + Y didn’t u text back?’ god, obsessive, much?
‘I was f*cking sick.’ And pissed now. And semi-worried about Alex and why he reacted that way? All my questions were still banging around unanswered. I got dressed and went downstairs, texting Ranger who wouldn’t shut up. He was in school right now. In class. And he was most likely openly texting. How else would he be doing it so fast?
‘Pay attention, R.’ I scolded. I was getting less and less annoyed with him as I marched down the stairs. He kept saying sweet things like he missed me and stuff. I couldn’t help it. He was melting my bad attitude away. He listened to me about class, told me he’d text me at lunch, and I read his old texts.
‘Sry, Kota, wts rong? Ok, baby?’ awww! Sweet. That was right after I exploded at him.
‘Dakota?? R u ok?’
‘I'm sry, babe, plz 4gve me lol’
‘Kota? Sry,sry,plz txt me bck’
‘Dakota? SORRY, will you PLEASE text me BACK??’
And on it went. The 56 were mostly question marks and caring little messages. Some were anger, lots remorse. Poor guy. He even sent me good night and good morning texts. I almost cried. This had never happened to me before. No one ever...liked me before this place. Especially not like this.
I finally put my phone in my pocket and proceeded to the kitchen, where the family seems to live.
And sure enough…
“Dakota! Are you okay, sweetheart? How do you feel?” Keric asked immediately, his chair scraping backwards as he stood up.
“I feel pretty good..kinda dizzy..You?” he wrapped me up in a caring daddy hug.
“I’m great, hon, happy to see you up and about. You scared me, kid.” He patted my back and turned to the fridge.
“Uh, yes please. K—Eric?” oopsies. Hehe, almost called him Keric. Heh.
“What happened last nigh? A-after..”
“The incident?” he suggested, smiling and handing me some ice water. I gulped it down and he refilled it, explaining.
“Well, the cops came and asked you some stuff, but I can see how you wouldn’t remember that. You were kind of..Out of it. And then you got sick and we found out your temp. was 104.3, so I called the hospital and they told me to give you some ice and make you stay still and stuff. That wasn’t hard ‘cause by then you were sleeping.” That seemed to be the end.
“Sorry, thanks.”
“Do you feel well enough to go to school for the rest of the day? Kellan and Kian are there. Adalina’s not going to be back for a few days though.”
“I guess I could..yeah. Thank you, Eric. ” I gave him back my empty glass. I texted Ranger that I was coming. He immediately offered me a ride and I reminded him where he was. Keric said he’d drive me anyway. Or lend me the other car. But I wasn’t feeling 100 percent, so I took him up on his offer.
He dropped me off and walked me in, excusing my partial absence with the secretary.
We said goodbye.
I went to class. And my heart just about burst when I walked in. Ranger’s face was so…sweet. He seemed so excited to see me! It was so cute. I got a little self-conscious about the bruise on the side of my forehead. From the d*mn tree. But it faded when I sat down by him and he beamed at me.
“Hey, baby.” He whispered. “Missed you.” He smiled sexily and I heard a few jealous sighs. He was pretty attractive…I wonder why he decided to drop everything and be my best friend. Weird. But I liked it nonetheless.
“Hi!” someone whispered, tapping my shoulder. I turned to see Lala smiling brightly at me.
“Hey, Lala!” I whispered. The teacher didn’t even notice. It probably helped that we were watching a movie and a bunch of people were talking. Louder than we were.
“Feel better?” Ranger asked me.
As I turned back to answer him, my eyes caught sight of Kian sitting all alone, sort of hunched over, sadness and worry etched in every feature. I felt for the guy. My fiancé. Fiancé. Not like he acts like one. But still.
“Yeah. So, what’s up?” I said to Ranger, typing in a text.
‘Kian, hon, it’ll b ok. She’s doing well. She’ll b bck soon. So stp being a faggot + pay attention. <3’
“Well, I’m so glad you’re here because…..” he kind of faded out as I watched Kian jerk, surprised. He reached into his pocket and took out his phone, holding it over his desk obviously. It seemed an eternity that he spent reading what I sent him. Then he smiled slightly, typed something back and returned phone to pocket. He glanced over at me and I smiled at him sympathetically. He nodded and slumped a little less. My phone buzzed.
‘Thanks, babe. You always know what to say.’
My smile lit up the room.

Submitted: December 27, 2009

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StoryTellah matter how sexy his name is..he seems to have OCD..loll
i love Kian..and how come ranger didnt notice the txting between kota and kian?0.o
omg..update soon

Sun, December 27th, 2009 1:46am


mybe he noticed jst didn't say nething....?? tnks fer readin mannn

Sun, December 27th, 2009 9:43pm


Ranger is sorta scary. Like stalker-ish. *Shudders*
Very cute chapter though. She almost called Eric Keric!
And I love the last bit! So cute!
Can't wait for more!!!

Sun, December 27th, 2009 3:39am


thanks so so so much love u all

Sun, December 27th, 2009 9:41pm


wow! wow! cant say anything other than wow! plz keep me posted!

Sun, December 27th, 2009 3:46am



Sun, December 27th, 2009 9:41pm

Valena Crest

Awwwh just awww I

Sun, December 27th, 2009 3:52am


ur name or uuuu?? lol

Sun, December 27th, 2009 9:35pm


Ahhhh i loved every minute of it, and so now i have come to a conclusion: I will love kian, ranger and ALEX. But mostly ALEX! Can't wait til you update again, which i know you will soon! Great chappie! ~KeRi

Sun, December 27th, 2009 4:33am


aww, tank uuu soo muuuuuuch

Sun, December 27th, 2009 9:35pm

Beki Waidel

plz update soon!!!

Sun, December 27th, 2009 6:45am


u know it

Sun, December 27th, 2009 9:32pm

the orange ninJA

are you shittin' me right now...y did you stop? lol sorry GREAT effing story...and i love when dakota gropes alex...funny shit right there. well hop to it alot of fans are expecting this story to continue.
luv ya.

Sun, December 27th, 2009 6:54am


whoa! love ur name dude ninJA

Sun, December 27th, 2009 9:31pm


Alex why so mad all of a sudden. And I can't figure out why he was in her room in the first place. U no what made me sorta giggle though? When he talked about the phone ringing all night. Did he not think to switch it off or take it to another room so he couldn't hear it? Still love him to bits even though he's a bit of an idiot. LOL!

Sun, December 27th, 2009 11:52am


tank ya tank ya tank ya soooo muchos!!

ps. ik i don't make ny sense up muchos...neway

Sun, December 27th, 2009 9:30pm


Ok dude now my mind has again gone berserk! Ok so there went being with Alex.(Umm duh she thinks he's hot!) I mean again with the being a douche? Ranger (although his name still reminds me of power rangers) is a Kreepy stalkery perve-ish wierdo freak guy. Well Kian was nice in this chapter I mean the end was so Kute and of Kourse she knows what to say she's Kota, and Awwwww he Kalled her BABE! I mean wow! lol yes I agree Kian stop being a faggot! Dude now I want her to be with Kian again... Or Kellan, Kuz he plays hide and seek.(With Lala,) I like her, and her name she seems very easily excitable. Well I am rambling so that chapter was great (Specially the end)

Sun, December 27th, 2009 7:56pm


tank ya sooooo much i always looove ur comments

Sun, December 27th, 2009 9:25pm


I think she should really stop even liking her fiancee! He is in love with someone else! And I am in love with Alex! Just love him! And of course this story! Just finished reading this whole story and I love it. I know you have many fans lining up, but I hope u can still update me. I really want to read more. :D

Sun, December 27th, 2009 8:50pm


lol thank you so much

Sun, December 27th, 2009 9:20pm



Sun, December 27th, 2009 11:23pm



Sun, December 27th, 2009 9:18pm


Awesome update! Alex is very sensitive though!!!
Haha tell me when you update:)

Mon, December 28th, 2009 12:04am


lol thnx

Sun, December 27th, 2009 9:14pm


GAH!!! Make up his mind!!!! He needs to just leave me and go with her!!!! (That sounds sooo weird...but it's true! haha)

And when I'm not there he's all good to her and caring...but when I am be's an ass! GAH!!! make up your damn mind Kian!!! Choose her and get it over with!!!Just give me to Alex and I'll be good! =D haha


Mon, December 28th, 2009 1:14am



Sun, December 27th, 2009 9:11pm


Aw, I

Mon, December 28th, 2009 1:57am


alex is like, the same age...i guess he skipped today lol

Sun, December 27th, 2009 8:32pm


Wtf I'm so thoroughly confused by Kian! He is macking on girl a. and then all sweet to girl B wtf is he doing!? Ranger is a bit overwhelming lol as is Alex and his temper but it all fits in together well haha

Mon, December 28th, 2009 5:42am


tank ya tank yahehe

Sun, December 27th, 2009 9:43pm


FINALLY...LOL...I get on here at least 5 times a day to see if you've updated this is a really good chapter and it's so sweet...if you're still adding people to the story it would be awesome if you added up the good work and keep me updated...please

Mon, December 28th, 2009 6:03am


fo sho yeah, that makes me feel so wanted lol

Sun, December 27th, 2009 10:05pm

Cierra Shawnnee Drummond

Gah!! I think that you are an amazing author
but update!!
and if you don't mind I think your story needs another character.
I would be thoroughly overjoyed if you would read my story entitled Made by Magic and tell me what to do.

Mon, December 28th, 2009 10:00am


lol thank you so much!! there r tons of characters i hafta put in, i just have to find opportunities to put them in....suggestions?? i'm open to ittt realylylyy!!thnx

Mon, December 28th, 2009 9:18am


Awwwww. Ranger is a stalker. I like lala shes funny. Alex is a butt nugget he was nice to her then he HAD to be a crazy ass. Well update more please!! I love it thanks!!

Mon, December 28th, 2009 4:09pm


tank u tank u!!

Mon, December 28th, 2009 9:19am



Mon, December 28th, 2009 11:52pm


tanks tanks i will

Tue, December 29th, 2009 8:42pm

Hopeless Romantic

Omg i LOVE this!! Ranger kinda creeps me out but he's okay i guess lol. I Absolutely love Kian but he needs to make up his mind!! Anywhoo i LOVE this story so so sooo much!! Update soon!! :D

Tue, December 29th, 2009 1:47am


thanks so much i'll try

Tue, December 29th, 2009 8:42pm

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