Results For My First Competition

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Hope everybody had fun writing these and enjoyed reading another entry!

I marked these out of ten for how much I liked them and out of five for spellings and grammer etc., you will be glad to know that no one got less than six out of ten! This is the second time that I've typed this out because of an unfortunate incident between my baby sister and the backspace button so if I come across as repetitive or irritated that's why.  kcrystal14 entered her story Decisions but (as far as I can see) didn't comment on any other entry so her story wasn't included.

Those named below please tell me what you would like me to read - five for 1st, four for 2nd, three for 3rd, two for 4th and one for 5th.

 

Here are the results:

 

1. Wake Up by AfterShock

This won because it connected with the reader, the second person perspective helped this, and because the grammer and spellings etc. were great.

2. And Then I Met You by Miss Melodramatic

This was a good idea and I find stories set before he 20th Century interesting. once again, excellent spellings and grammer.

3. Without Grace by aurumangoes

This touched my heart and I liked the way it alternated between the main character's memory and the therapist's questions. the spellings and grammer were impecable.

4. Cold Kiss by PoeticMe143

I liked this because it as interesting and Poetic manges to show us the true meaning behind "crazy in love". Grammer and spellings were amazing.

5. The Bus Fellow  by Archia

This had such simplicity to it that I couldn't leave it out and I liked the ending, how it told us why he was going to the hospital without stating the obvious.Also had good grammer and spellings.


Submitted: February 28, 2015

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PoeticMe♥

Congratulations to everyone!!! Thanks for hosting this contest! ~Poetic

Sat, February 28th, 2015 5:57pm

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Thanks for entering! I couldn't have done it without you lot!

Sat, February 28th, 2015 10:24am

Labyrinth Black

Sigh. Oh well...

Sat, February 28th, 2015 6:28pm

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It was a hard choice, all the entries were excellent!

Sat, February 28th, 2015 2:30pm

Miss Melodramatic

Thank you so much for organising this competition and I'm so glad you liked my story enough for me to get a placing :D I'm really glad I took part in this contest and well done to all the other contestants!

Sat, February 28th, 2015 8:36pm

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I'm glad I organised the competition, it was fun and I got to read all the excellent stories! ????

Sat, February 28th, 2015 2:39pm

DJcyan

Nice job to the winners! Thanks for letting me in on this competition, and if you ever have any others let me know! I will continue to read your work and stuff like that! :P

Sat, February 28th, 2015 10:37pm

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I will definitely tell you about my next competition, and thanks for entering! ????

Sat, February 28th, 2015 2:40pm

insanewriter94

Congrats to the winners

Sun, March 1st, 2015 8:52am

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Everyone is a winner :)

Thu, March 12th, 2015 11:52am

Archia

Oh cool, thank you so much. Congrats to everyone.
It's be great if you could read a chapter of my novel 'Your Alley Path'. Cheers

Sun, March 1st, 2015 9:39pm

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I'll certainly read it :)

Thu, March 12th, 2015 11:54am

Ever A. Darling

Awe! Congrats to the winners! (:

Tue, March 3rd, 2015 5:49am

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All the entries were amazing!

Thu, March 12th, 2015 11:54am

Spyguy

Thanks for offering the contest, & my deepest, heartfelt kudos to all who won!

Tue, March 10th, 2015 8:44am

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By just taking part, you won. :)

Thu, March 12th, 2015 11:53am

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