Broken Heart and Tears
With broken heart and tears,
I've spent sleepless nights with fears.
Trusted blindly every word you said,
Hated that day when you walked away.
Your songs make me cry,
Now no more chance for me to try.
What made you go away from me,
I'm crying for you , don't you see?
You're still in my heart and brain,
In my blood and in my veins.
I loved you that's a fact,
but nothing, no one can bring you back.
Now all day , I do cry,
Love is a thing which I can't buy.
Still confused, what made you go?
Tell me my love , I need to know .
Now it's all done with me and you,
I can't bear the pain I'm going through.
I wish I could die,
cause now my life is like a lie .
But before that , I want to tell you,
All my life, I LOVED YOU.
Submitted: April 18, 2014
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That was a very heartfelt poem and was sad and I loved it
Sat, April 19th, 2014 3:41am
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thank you so much!!!!!
Fri, April 18th, 2014 9:00pm
So heart breaking. I love how you were able to capture how much this person meant to the speaker. There were several powerful lines that inferred that he made the her who she was.:):)
Sat, April 19th, 2014 4:26am
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thank u so much!!!!!
Fri, April 18th, 2014 10:37pm
So heart breaking. I love how you were able to capture how much this person meant to the speaker. There were several powerful lines that inferred that he made the her who she was.:):)
Sat, April 19th, 2014 4:26am
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thank u so much!!!!!
Fri, April 18th, 2014 10:36pm
I was right!!!! It is great!!! it had me all teary and stuff!!! Great!!! :D
Sat, April 19th, 2014 4:57am
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thank u so much!!!!! it means a lot to me.(^_^)
Fri, April 18th, 2014 10:35pm
Great description of love lost. I like your words, flow and ryhme. If i was u ..i would get a dictionary with synonyms, and more precisely discriptive words that you can play around with. Thats what i do. I found words that ryhme that i never knew ... great work!
Sat, April 19th, 2014 5:53am
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thank u so much!!!!!
Sat, April 19th, 2014 2:46am
I don't really know much about poems but I really liked this one. You are a talented poet. I could sense the emotions going through my head as I read it. Good job :)
Sat, April 19th, 2014 6:00am
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thank u so much!!!!!
Sat, April 19th, 2014 2:46am
That was one of the best poems I have read on this site! I loved it, though it was sad, I could imagine everything, the imagery was great.
Sat, April 19th, 2014 6:41am
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thank u so much!!!!!
Sat, April 19th, 2014 2:46am
So emotional, the music fits it all so well. I love this poem and it's sad that the one you love left your side :(
Sat, April 19th, 2014 8:33am
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thank u so much!!!!!
Sat, April 19th, 2014 2:46am
This is a Brilliant poem. I really enjoyed reading it a lot and it's written with such true emotions. The rhyming is absolutely flawless. A Like from me!
Sat, April 19th, 2014 12:52pm
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Thank u so much!!!!! It means a lot to me.....
Tue, April 22nd, 2014 8:45pm
You did a good job with making it flow well and with expressing the mood. Be sure to check out my poems some time and keep up the great work!
Sat, April 19th, 2014 3:01pm
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Thank u so much!!!!! It means a lot to me.....and i will surely read ur work.....
Tue, April 22nd, 2014 8:45pm
Wonderful! And i igve props to anyone that can write poems in any style but free verse because I struggle with differnt styles of poems but free verse and thats all my poems. Your poem flowed nicely. I really Like it. Keep it up. Have a great day:) Also, since this was good, Im taking it that your a great poet. So, if you dont mind I would for you to check out one or two of my works:)
Sat, April 19th, 2014 7:08pm
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Thank u so much!!!!! It means a lot to me.....and i will surely read ur work.....
Tue, April 22nd, 2014 8:42pm
A job well done! :) It rhymes well and is full with emotions. So loving it ;)
Sun, April 20th, 2014 3:13am
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Thank u so much!!!!! It means a lot to me.....
Tue, April 22nd, 2014 8:41pm
Amazing poem. It's so emotional and I love it. :)
Sun, April 20th, 2014 1:43pm
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thanks!!!!!!
Tue, April 22nd, 2014 8:41pm
Beautiful poem, you really expressed this poem well, it flowed well and the words you used were great :) I enjoyed this poem, it was great and gets a like from me :D
Sun, April 20th, 2014 1:45pm
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thank you so muchhhhhhh!!!!!!!
Tue, April 22nd, 2014 8:40pm
awe positively romantic and sad, lovely piece of work, you never know they might read this and come back to you.
Sun, April 20th, 2014 2:16pm
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Thank u so much!!!!! It means a lot to me.....
Tue, April 22nd, 2014 8:40pm
Wow, awesome poem! I really liked the way each stanza rhymed, this made so much sense to me. This is a very heartfelt piece, and the message is shown clearly here. Well done! ~Brianna~
Sun, April 20th, 2014 6:22pm
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Thank u so much!!!!! It means a lot to me.....
Tue, April 22nd, 2014 8:39pm
This poem almst made my eyes wet..such a heart breaking poem..amazing rhyming pattern..keep d gud work :)
Sun, April 20th, 2014 7:16pm
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Thank u so much!!!!! It means a lot to me.....
Tue, April 22nd, 2014 8:39pm
Heart rendering poem. It's got such a nice sound to it and it flow effortlessly. Good job.
Tue, April 22nd, 2014 7:50am
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Thank u so much!!!!! It means a lot to me.....
Tue, April 22nd, 2014 8:37pm
I loved it's rhythm and loved the style u expressed the whole love story in just few line. Just flawlessssssssssssss :)
Tue, April 22nd, 2014 11:45am
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Thank u so much!!!!! It means a lot to me.....
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Awww Great poem that's a little sad. You did a wonderful job with this poem :)
Fri, April 18th, 2014 3:47pmAuthor
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thank you!!!!!
Fri, April 18th, 2014 9:01pm