Chapter 7:

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Comments: 6


I don't know what happened...I just like blanked.

Chapter Seven.

Reality hits, hard.


Alex is standing behind me, his arms around my waist and his chin on my shoulder. His tall body bent over so he is resting at my hight. The night has suddenly become chilly, and I shiver as the wind blows.I look up, and see the boardwalk starting to close down. A rain storm is mixing in with the clear night sky, and distant claps of thunder could be herd.

Alex's arms remove from my waist, and he spins me around.

"It's late." He whispers in my ear. "We should get going."

I run my hand through his hair, and pull at it softly. He smiles at me, and then ducks in for a quick kiss. Just as his lips touch mine, rain starts to splatter on the beach. I pull away and lift my hands up into the air, catching rain and letting it drip down my arms. Alex laughs at me, and then grabs a hold of my wrist and starts dragging me down the street.

I run softly behind him as we turn down street after street. I didin't recognize where we were going, but he did. We turned through a few more streets. He stopped when we reached the hospital. The bright lights from the inside reflecting off the sidewalk.

"Is she out already?" I asked.

I knew she went in today, early this morning, but I didn't think she was out already. They told us that it could last posibly over a day. They had to opperate on diferent parts of her body, and close it up then start over.

"No." He looked down. "But I wont be able to sleep tonight, so I'm going to stay here until she is."

"Want me to stay with you? We never finished twenty questions."

He smirked, and looked up at me. "I would love for you to stay."

"Well, lets go find a place to sit."


"Favorite animal?" I asked.Alex looked around, as if searching for an answer. "Hey, I hate to break it to you but I don't think the white walls are going to tell you your favorite animal." I poked my tongue out at him.

"Wolff." He laughed, showing off his cute little dimple. "Is there a dress in your suitecase?" He winked.

"Yes." I looked down, and felt my cheeks burn. "Is there a tux in yours?"

"Nope! Just some fancy shirts. "Will you go to dinner with me tomorrow?"

"Hey! What version of twenty questions is this?" I faked horror, and placed my hand over my heart.

"Just answer the question." He rolled his eyes.

Just as I nodded my head yes, two doctors ran through the doors of the waiting room. An alarm was going off on the other side of the doors, people were running in and out of one room.

Sophie's room.

Alex stood up, and ran towards the doors. A doctor pushed him back, and struggled to keep him still. "That's my sister!" Alex screamed over and over again. One doctor came over, and started talking to Alex to calm him down. "That's my sister, tell me what the fuck is going on!" He screamed.

Both doctors nodded there heads saying no. They backed away, and quickly closed the door behind them. Alex was standing there staring at the closed door. His hand lashed out, and punched the wall. The sound of his knuckles popping filling the now silent room.

He grabbed his fist, and then slid down the wall. He sat with his back against the wall, and his head wrapped in his hands. Every now and then, he would shake from trying to hold back the tears. If watching him wasn't heartbreaking enough, the news from the doctor tore me to pieces.

I was sitting on the floor, Alex's head resting in my lap. His parents came walking out of the room. His mother's face stained red with tears. His father ghostly white. Alex stood up, and walked over to them.

"What's happening?" He demanded.

The doctor closed his eyes, and then sighed. "During the opperation, your sister slipped into a comma. We finished, but not without her slipping further into her deep comma. I'm afraid she will be put on life support, and she wont be off of it anytime soon.

That's all I needed to hear. My world got fuzzy, and the room started spinning. Alex looked over at me. "Nina? Are you okay?" I looked down at the fround. My dinner from earlier spilled out all over the floor. Alex reached out and grabbed me. "Nina! What's wrong?" I tried to speak, but I couldn't.

Blackness. There was nothing. My world went black.


Wow. That was...intresting. What do you guys think? And no, Nina isn't dead. She just passed out! I'm sorry it was so short, but If I put it with the next chapter, it would be wayyyyy to long.

XoXo Taylor.

Submitted: February 25, 2013

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I don't know what to think... I love your writing, but, no offence, but I didn't like this one as much. And i'm wondering why she fainted... I mean, she didn't know her that well (I think less that a week, again, no offence, but I'm really wondering why she even went on the trip in that short period of time), and at least she didn't die... But I do love Sophie, and I have a feeling that this story is going to be awesome. By the way, that wasn't meant to hurt you ^, sorry if it did - Angel

Mon, February 25th, 2013 6:16am


Actually,its been over a month since they met each-other, and as the summery states: She dosn't give up on anything. She went on the trip, because she didn't want to give up on Sophie.But thank you for reading, I appreciate your opinion^.^

Mon, February 25th, 2013 12:59pm


This chapter is so sweet between the two,and its sad also.
This chapter dont suck it gives thrill(my judgement),its boring if theirs no thriil right?.
Anyway,This is AMAZing!! love the thrill you've given us.

Mon, February 25th, 2013 10:40am


Thanks so much! I was starting to worry that I really messed this one up..but you changed my mind. Thank you, Thank you!! and Of course ^.^

Mon, February 25th, 2013 1:01pm



Mon, February 25th, 2013 7:37pm


Will do ^.^

Mon, February 25th, 2013 1:00pm

Black hearts

Really great chapter as always kmu!

Mon, February 25th, 2013 9:27pm


Will do ????

Tue, February 26th, 2013 12:49pm


WAAAAAAAAAAA! N-N-Nina p-p-passed out a-a-and S-S-Sophie i-i-is in a c-c-coma. W-w-why did you make it so short? *wipes snotty nose and takes a few deep breaths* Okay, I'm good.
I reeeaaallly hope you update Chapter 8 soon... like today or tomorrow since it seems you already have it done...
Anyway, just keep me updated.

Mon, February 25th, 2013 10:08pm


I'm sorry, I know it's rather sad :( but the new chapter should be up tomorrow ! :D

Tue, February 26th, 2013 12:50pm


No Sophie no!!!!! This can't be happening I'm sorry!!!!
Anyways well written :-)
I don't remember telling you to keep me updated but please do :-)

Sun, March 3rd, 2013 8:13pm


thanks!! and I will ^.^

Sun, March 3rd, 2013 3:42pm

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