Betrayed by My Best Friend

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Sometimes the people you thought were closest to you turn out to be your worst enemies.

There we were, both so young,

Just standing with the crowd.

We were the closest of friends,

Laughing so loud.

As time went on,

I started trusting you more and more.

I told you things that I,

Hadn't told anyone before.

I opened up to you,

I gave you my heart,

Then you turn right around,

And tear it apart.

You think that I don't know,

What you're saying behind my back.

You think you're so perfect,

But there's still so much that you lack.

You predend that you don't know,

Why I'm in so much pain.

Secretly hating you,

Betrayed by you yet again.

You think that you can just,

Butt into my life.

But if you really want to make me happy,

You must pay the price.

And now that I've broken free,

From your deadly curse,

I realize your the one who ruined my life,

And continued to make it worse.

Now you're angry with me,

Because I refuse to answer your call.

Because I'm trying to forget you,

So I won't have to fall.

So now, just remember,

When I turn my back on you,

It's because you did the same to me,

Something horible to live through.

Never again will I trust you.

Never again will I call you a friend.

Never again will you ruin my life,

Our friendship has come to an end.

How dare you say that you care,

How dare you even try.

How can you be so heartless,

And try to make me believe your lies.

I've learned form my mistakes.

I've learned from what I've done.

I've learned not to trust you.

You, or anyone.

I've been betrayed by a friend.


Submitted: May 16, 2008

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Crazyguy

Fri, May 16th, 2008 9:09pm

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!?

Fri, May 16th, 2008 2:31pm

Crazyguy

I like it. Very sad, and I have been through that feeling before. It sucks. I hope you haven't had too.:) I like it! See ya later

Fri, May 16th, 2008 9:11pm

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Thanks, really glad that you liked it. :)

Fri, May 16th, 2008 2:31pm

indiefreak

Such emotions... Be strong, Mystory. There are going to be a lot more betrayals after this. Stick with your true friends. Great poem.

Sat, May 17th, 2008 3:03am

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Thank you, I will. :)

Fri, May 16th, 2008 8:33pm

dubl

i don't get why people do things like that to each other. it's dumb. i know how you felt though. i've had an experience like this. great job :]

Sat, May 17th, 2008 4:29pm

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Yeah, I know what you mean...Thanks :D

Sat, May 17th, 2008 9:34am

kidarox123

This is wonderful! i personally can relate to this! this spells it out perfectly!! loved it!

Sat, May 17th, 2008 11:49pm

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Thank you. Really glad that you liked it. :)

Sat, May 17th, 2008 10:26pm

Raya

hi. nice poem,it's full of so much emotion. its so sad that a friend betrayed you . My best friend betrayed me too. I know how it is like to betrayed.

Sun, May 18th, 2008 8:45pm

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Yeah, it's hard when something liek that happens. Thanks. :)

Sun, May 18th, 2008 1:55pm

Willi

beautiful poem i like it great job.

Mon, May 19th, 2008 3:09pm

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Thank, :)

Mon, May 19th, 2008 10:33am

ihaztehbukket

Fantastic poem Carly. I expect nothing less. Flowed nicely, and I could really feel the hurt and anger (just a little bit) put into this.
=D

Mon, May 19th, 2008 8:09pm

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Thank you very much. Yeah, I was feeling a little angry when I wrote this. :P

Mon, May 19th, 2008 1:42pm

PropheticaLee Speaking

i've been betrayed by my friends my whole life... but if you don't give people a chance, it just makes you hollow inside... it is better to have lived, than not lived at all... good job

Wed, May 21st, 2008 4:48am

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Yes, I've heard that saying before...Glad you liked it. :)

Tue, May 20th, 2008 11:08pm

OHSHCKaori

AWW I know how you feel! IT's awful, you try to leave them alone and start all over, and they get mad at you because they are still "trying to forgive you and be friends" because they are under the impression that you were the one who betrayed the friendship.

Great emotion. Good job.

~kaori

Thu, May 29th, 2008 2:18pm

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Yes, I know. It's so confusing. Glad you liked it. ^^

Thu, May 29th, 2008 11:29am

foreveryourgirl123

Very nice poem. Nicely written, breaks the flow a few times, but still very effective. Just want to say that life is never completely "ruined". Just remember that through everything you go through. :) It's kept me going. Xxx

Sat, May 31st, 2008 6:21am

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Thanks so much. Really glad that you liked it. =D

Sat, May 31st, 2008 3:55pm

Wandiola

its good!!

Sun, June 8th, 2008 12:24am

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Thanks. :D

Sat, June 7th, 2008 9:34pm

Ayame

It was a wonderful poem. I have been through many friendships like that. I don't really trust anyone that much anymore. But you poem rocks! SO....ROCK ON, love! Rock on and be strong.

Mon, June 9th, 2008 1:44am

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Thank you very much. Yeah, it's hard to learn to trust again after being betrayed by someone. yes, I'l keep on rocking! haha

Sun, June 8th, 2008 6:46pm

dmlmex

I liked this poem. ^__^ you write good poems. V___V I agree with AYAME... i cant trust many people these days... V___V good job, keep writing!!!!! ^__^

Mon, June 9th, 2008 4:29am

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Thank you very much. Yeah, it's hard to tell who you can and cannot trust.

Sun, June 8th, 2008 9:59pm

Dark Skylight

This poem was so sad.I know how is it feel.But really nice nice poem.:)

Wed, June 11th, 2008 6:17pm

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Thank you. =]

Wed, June 11th, 2008 11:31am

matmoo

Kind of sad, pretty angry too. And it comes across, which is a good sign in a poem and a poet.
good stuff!
matmoo :)

Sat, June 14th, 2008 5:04pm

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Thank you! =D

Sat, June 14th, 2008 10:53pm

findingmyway

Wow this is so powerful and I love the way this is written..I can relate to this completely, and I bet (unfortunately) many others can too. Very good job. :)

Sun, June 15th, 2008 4:00am

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Thanks so much. Yeah, I'm sure everyone had gone through this.

Sat, June 14th, 2008 10:55pm

Maple Bowen

I love it! That's what poetry is all about, expressing your emotions. Friends can hurt, and I've been there and felt that. Thanks for your inspiration!

Wed, June 18th, 2008 11:06pm

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Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it. Yeah, for me, writing is how I express myself and say things I need to get out.

Wed, June 18th, 2008 4:42pm

Yumi

love it... becuz it is so true!

Thu, June 19th, 2008 1:41am

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Thanks. It seems everyone ca relate to this kind of thing.

Wed, June 18th, 2008 7:30pm

hiralarious

Wow..this was brilliant! I feel like saying bloody brilliant...so this was bloody brillinat too! :D
I have been meaning to read this for days, and I was def. not dissapointed. Please tell me when you have a new poem! (:

Fri, June 20th, 2008 1:52am

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Okay, thanks so much. Really glad you liked it. =D

Thu, June 19th, 2008 7:00pm

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