bipolar remote controller

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

poem about my bipolar ex girlfriend

You’re a pretty little liar,

self-inflicting ball of fire.

a cliche,

over dramatic display,

of cosmic bursting all in the burning flames,

of your bloodshot eyes,

conspiracy theories to improvise.

you ran away like a stray,

committed to the decay.

all you have to do is watch it all go away,

another soul will not be lost today.

Violated, so downgraded.

oversaturation, stimulation in overdrive

and now the countdown,

three, two, one.

life is too short, cut the circuits of the cyborg,

there are two sides of the poles,

emotions out of control.

no sense of sympathy,

the voices construction play you like a symphony.

Puppet with strings,

the venom in your veins certainly stings.


by all you hated,

no one can ever save you

from the little girl desecrated.  

and now the countdown,

three, two, one.

All hope is now lost,

eternal slumber in the frost.

The light that fueled your fire has burned a hole between us so,

I cannot seem to reach an end to our crippling foundations,

disconnected communication.

Three, two, one,

and now the break down,

three, two, one,

princess has lost her crown,

three, two, one,

you want it all now,

three, two, one,

you’re fading like the noonday sun,

three, two, one,

and now the break down. 

Submitted: June 07, 2014

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How I loved this and i love the rhyming to this it flowed very well and and my favorite line was "nonsense of sympathy, the voices construction play you like a symphony" that just moved me it was really good!
Keep up the poems :)

Sat, June 7th, 2014 5:44am


thank you very much!=)always love feedback and appreciate it!

Wed, June 11th, 2014 2:18pm


Your rhyming flowed beautifully, I especially liked the repetition of "three,two,one." This was beautiful and moving. Keep it up!

Sat, June 7th, 2014 3:52pm


thank you so much! I always love to hear people enjoying my stuff especially since I just got into poetry recently!

Wed, June 11th, 2014 2:21pm

unmasked delusions

Wow I could really feel how you felt in this, Definitely left its mark. It was so great, It all came together so good! I honestly like this

Wed, June 11th, 2014 11:42pm


thank you so much that means alot!

Thu, June 12th, 2014 2:23pm

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