Chapter 1: My Last Breath-

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Reads: 334
Comments: 2


- My Last Breath -


I closed my eyes.

Straining my ears to hear a voice.

His voice

The man I loved so much.

But I knew,that I was never gonna hear his voice,

because he was gone...


I slowly opened my eyes,

staring down at the crashing waves.

I watched as the raindrops fell into the water,

It looked as if the rain was a bullet,

and the bullet was piercing into someone's body

Stephen's body

I smiled faintly,

remembering all the great memories we had.

I shook my head,

my smile disappearing as a tear fell from my eye.

I quickly swiped it away,

and muttered to myself,

"Stop being such a baby, he's gone now, get over it."

I glared down at the waves as I said it.

I sighed.

Knowing that I could never get over it.

The thunder rumbled above me,

causing the old weak bridge to vibrate beneath me.

I sniffed, blinking the tears away from my eyes.

I smiled faintly,

and stepped onto the railing,

and Jumped.

Submitted: November 29, 2010

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It's a bit messed... :\ ill try fixing it later :)

Mon, November 29th, 2010 9:54pm


please update me - its really good and i really really hope you continue with it

Sun, December 12th, 2010 4:07am


thanks haha :)

Fri, December 17th, 2010 1:56pm

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