Atop a tall tree house

LTskittles125

oh wow this is really good :) great job with word choice
keep up the writing
-LT

smruti

great wording dear nice one....just great...liked it.

mdh7

Great poem! Well written. Thanks for drawing my attention to it.

springsun

So sweet!
I like the simplicity and the short storyline of this poem. But what I loved about it, was the circle you created. He starts off in a tree, and moves on to another. And of course, as always, I enjoyed the most vivid descriptions.

Thanks for letting me know. Keep up the good work.

A7XRica

I love this poem.
It shows the simplicity and the contentment of the "character". Good job!

Tech True Story

This is very good :)

Ekeuhie

On the road again... A hunter with fire in his eyes and the thirst for adventure ravishing his mind. Nice one. Here comes the beautiful imperfection. Maybe you should try other synonyms for notebook. I saw it repeated over and over again. You could use parchment, scroll, etc, you know. Make it really adventurous.

ashtray0belief

I feel as if on some level you're writting about yourself too, because it seems like you put your heart in your poems like the man in this poem.
Very good. Thank you for the invite :)

Don George

Hi nid,
Very interesting.
The picture you paint is easily seen and even more importantly, felt.
I like the neverending quality to this (like life).
:D

Wilbur

Yup, yup, yip. That's just how it lives, isn't it Nid? One notebook at a time, one day at a time, trillions and mega-millions of thoughts, and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots of writing.
Kind regards, Wilbur

youinspireme

Wow this is truly a beautiful poem

SmileValentine

done reading this! it's a nice piece and i like it :)

Maij

Thanks for dropping the request, this is a beautiful poem. The imagery was so simply descried but at the same time beautifully vivid. I also loved you description of his writing process; the phases he experienced are so true for almost every write (me included) however, I found the end of the poem enigmatic; he seemed to put so much of himself into the work but he left it behind. Did you intended to symbolize a specific theme or idea? Overall, excellent poem Nid :) I really did enjoy reading??

Irish wolf hound

Lovely poem, enjoyed every bit. ;D

yazz4youu

Great poem! I really enjoyed it. :)

yazz4youu

Great poem! I really enjoyed it. :)

Bany

Hi =) I really liked this poem, and you repetition in particular. I also like that you DIDN'T rhyme: it would be too cheesy if you did. Fantastic job!

chikeria12

This is really well written. The imagery you create is so vivid and well seen in the readers mind. I love how it tells a story, too. How he goes to one tree one day and the next a new one. Awesome job!

Neekas

Very nice VERY!I can't find the meanings easily so thanx also for Maij for asking and everything coz (ahem:I being annoying ahem ahem).As always not just writting a poem but also getting a great lesson for us nid.Give yourself a gredit.Yeah, these days people feel as if their art (whatever that is) is not worthy if it's not shown to others-and I don't leave myself out of this poor thinking.We all want to make a history, live our name somewhere to not extcinct withought ever walking on earth.I think that's why.
I bow to those who do it only for their love for it or because they truly want to make a change and not just draw attention above themseles.Great work Nid.Let me know for anything new.

Starlit

I really like it! It has a mysterious tone to it, and causes you to imagine what the man is doing :D let me know if you have other work you would like me to read. And if you have time, I would appreciate you having a look at me novel, "Dragon Escape". Thanks!!!! -star