I WILL NEVER FORGET YOU!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Concept of this poem—
A man who has recently lost his wife remembers and recollects certain nostalgic thoughts about his wife. Though I am still a student and not married, something in me wanted to imagine a situation like this and I poured out my feelings and thoughts…

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The enchanting smile on your lips

And your tender touch

Freezing my heart

When you bid goodbye…

On your deathbed!

Embracing me closer and tighter

Never wanting to let me go!

I will never forget,

The undying spark of passion you possessed

Missing me with every breath

And the longing you had to see me

In the deepest corner of your heart!

I will never forget,

How sincere, trustworthy and lovable you were

And the unconditional love you had,

In your heart, with no bounds!

I will never forget,

The precious sensuous moments we shared together!

The greatest feeling we experienced when we made love!

Forgetting all pains and sorrows, we had in life.

After all,

I will never forget

That special you!

The flame of my love!

The angel of my mind!

The light and dream of my life!

The joy of my soul!

The rainbow of my heart!

My dearest wife!

My sweet rose!

I will now leave you like a friend!

Farewell my love!

I will never forget you!

Srinidhi.R

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Submitted: May 24, 2009

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nid

please read this poem! Its brand new written by me with a lot of feelings

Sun, May 24th, 2009 11:07am

cherub666

Aw...very sweet!
You are right I could sense a lot of emotion in this!

Sun, May 24th, 2009 2:31pm

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thanks for reading...

Sun, May 24th, 2009 9:04am

Mallory

it was sweet, i could tell you really loved the subject of this poem.
if you get a chance, check out one of my poems and tell me what you think!

Sun, May 24th, 2009 6:33pm

Author
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Thanks for reading...i will definetly check out your poems

Sun, May 24th, 2009 11:05pm

schatzi

This poem was very emotional! I liked your use of punctuation, it made the poem very powerful. Great job!

Mon, May 25th, 2009 1:49am

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thanks for your comment..

Sun, May 24th, 2009 11:05pm

thebrokenheart666

wow that was amazing!!!!! I can tell that you put a lot of your feeling in to it

Mon, May 25th, 2009 7:52am

Author
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THANKS FOR READING...

Mon, May 25th, 2009 12:58am

JenDamsel

WOW THIS IS REALLY SWEET AND ROMANTIC POEM. I COULD TELL YOU REALLY FELT IT. GREAT WORK. ~JENN

Mon, May 25th, 2009 8:07am

Author
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thanks for reading!!!!!!!!

Mon, May 25th, 2009 1:09am

Chococat

awww, soo sweet!! ????

Mon, May 25th, 2009 8:50am

Author
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thanks for reading..

Mon, May 25th, 2009 1:50am

merrymary

It's so great! Keep up the good work.

Mon, May 25th, 2009 8:58am

Author
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thank you!

Mon, May 25th, 2009 3:03am

neno

I love this..so much emotion in it..great job :)

Mon, May 25th, 2009 12:04pm

Author
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thank you for reading....

Mon, May 25th, 2009 5:35am

Amy2609

It's never easy losing the ones you love... DX

Love is a flame... never let the fire burn out xx

Mon, May 25th, 2009 12:50pm

Author
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thank u for your comment

Mon, May 25th, 2009 6:03am

PoetsDemise14

Wow :o
That was deep..
I started to tear up a bit here,
I loved how you ended it with him saying
"I will leave you like a friend"
And saying farewell...
It really struck it home :)
Fantastic work!
Please keep writing!
Pinky promise me lolz :)

Mon, May 25th, 2009 4:26pm

Author
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wow..thank u !

Mon, May 25th, 2009 9:30am

VirtuousWords

This is a beautiful piece. It's so very touching and moving. I loved it, keep up the great writing.

Mon, May 25th, 2009 7:01pm

Author
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thanks for reading it

Mon, May 25th, 2009 9:30pm

CheetahBear

Great job Nid! That was a very well written and powerful poem that you wrote! Very worth the read! Again, good job!

Mon, May 25th, 2009 7:38pm

Author
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thanks for reading cheetahbear...

Mon, May 25th, 2009 9:30pm

FantasyandRomanceWriter

That is a very sad poem with lots of emotion and meaning :]. Great job, Nid! May your wife rest in peace :] :].
Good luck to you all :]!!!!
God bless you all :]!!!!

Tue, May 26th, 2009 12:21am

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thanksssssssss a lotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

Mon, May 25th, 2009 9:31pm

yinghua12

sweet, sad, and so moving at the same time... poor man though =(

Tue, May 26th, 2009 1:07am

Author
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thanks for reading...

Mon, May 25th, 2009 9:31pm

nid

thank u all for reading and giving a "i like it" vote...ur comments mean so much to me

Tue, May 26th, 2009 4:55am

KazWay

Awesome work; I love emotive poetry and you've achieved that perfectly. :D

Keep up the good work.

Tue, May 26th, 2009 8:18am

Author
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thankssss for reading

Tue, May 26th, 2009 2:51am

Anastasia Starlena

Thank you so much for asking me to rad this wonderful piece. It was very beautiful. You did an excellent job.

Take Care,
Ana

Tue, May 26th, 2009 1:00pm

Author
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thanksssssssssssssssss ana...

Tue, May 26th, 2009 7:07am

Sora

That is really good! A lot of emotion in it. It be great if you could check out some of my stories and poems! Thanx a bunch ~SAGE

Tue, May 26th, 2009 8:24pm

Author
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thanks for reading! I will check out all of 'em

Tue, May 26th, 2009 9:19pm

Lady Leah

Well first off, I really hope you weren't writing this peace from personally experience, but rather a theory or thought, because if you did it reaches a whole new depth of understanding.
I really enjoyed the poem, not maybe the best day to read it, because I ended up crying, common symptom of having a bad day, lol xD
Keep writing and update me when you have something new, I'm going now to check out some of your other stuff.
~Lady Leah~

Wed, May 27th, 2009 12:52pm

Author
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thanks lady leah for reading this!

Wed, May 27th, 2009 9:48pm

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