Chapter 2: Colin's Letter

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Reads: 391
Comments: 16

Sorry all to want to read more. I have taken Timmy down but I want to keep my comments. I kept the first letter up for a taste for newcomers. The Lost Letters will no longer be updated though. Sorry all, but I will keep writing other stuff for this site. Cheers.


Submitted: January 29, 2009

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Vicarious

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That was actually very, VERY good, Pail. It kept me interested all the way through, somewhat disgusted me here and there, but overall, it impressed me. Definitely better than Chapter 1. If the following installments in "the (lost) letters from home" are as good, then you will have a great piece of work before us. :P

You've made a fan out of me. Keep up the good work, and keep me updated.

Thu, January 29th, 2009 6:56pm

Author
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Thank you, thank you so much. The first letter was to get you into the mood of the story, but this is the one where it really gets started. Thank you so much once again. I'll keep you updated :)

Thu, January 29th, 2009 6:22pm

AcidCandyJuvenile

This one is actually very disturbing... But I like the Scharlette part and the overall story.

Fri, January 30th, 2009 4:53am

Author
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Yeah, Scarlette is one of my favorite characters. I love to write about her and Timmy. This is just the start of the story, just wait and see what comes next :) Thank you. Cheers.

Fri, January 30th, 2009 5:17am

Night Write

Who are you, this is good! I wonder, have you ever published a book? If not too bad. I love your style, it's dark like mine! Very good!

Fri, February 6th, 2009 5:45pm

Author
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Thank you.

Nope, never published a book, but that's the dream :P
Thanks for reading. Cheers.

Fri, February 6th, 2009 6:12pm

RogueHost

i like this chap also but; necrophilia much?? (with the mum) i was a bit disgusted.
But i really like the idea of the letters (great idea!!! I have no idea of how u came up with the idea but it's definitely original)
(Timmy reminds me a little of Donnie Darko if u know who that is?)
going to read the rest now :D

Thu, February 12th, 2009 11:36am

Author
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You like Colin as well? Cool. Yeah, Timmy does kind of remind you of Donnie Darko and this story does have some disgusting parts, but it adds to the expierience and the realism.

As for the letter part, when I first wrote Timmy's letter I wrote in letter form not knowing what was going to be produced and now I can't see Timmy being written any other way.

Thank you so much for reading, It means a lot. Thank you.

Thu, February 12th, 2009 5:19am

PoisonHeart

Great chapter. The shock-value of it is really captivating. Like something so horrible you can't look away. I don't think the necrophilia is pushing it to far. In fact, I'd say "push it farther". One of the greatest things about this story is that nothing is off-limits. Fighting against Satan (or God) should seem ridiculous, but you pull it off convincingly. Hell, I'm half-expecting to see some cannibalism in the next chapter...

Fri, February 13th, 2009 10:26am

Author
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Thank you, I love to shock people.

And you're right, nothing is off-limits. If anyone gets offended I say, "it's just a story." Push it farther? Of course I will!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Cheers. :)

Fri, February 13th, 2009 5:13am

Angelsong

oooh plot is getting more interesting. lol because he told us to xD timmy is very interesting indeed :P and not to mention BRUTAL. O_O jeebus he's insane! but i like his character for some reason :P really great work!

Tue, February 17th, 2009 2:32am

Author
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Thank you again :)

Timmy is brutal, everyone seems to like Timmy, it's very interesting to me. Thank you for reading and commenting :)

Mon, February 16th, 2009 6:58pm

Unperfect

This is really good.

Thu, February 19th, 2009 7:20am

Author
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Thank you again :)

Thu, February 19th, 2009 4:58am

ShadowsandMisery

Wow working for Death to slay Lucifer, and make war on both Heaven and Hell, theres a twist, and a very good one at that. I like.

Thu, February 19th, 2009 10:41pm

Author
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Thank you again :)

Yeah, the war will be massive as well. more on that later. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Thu, February 19th, 2009 7:01pm

rorgon94

I'm really loving this now, Pail. I'm hooked. At first I thought that it was about some, as I've said before, f**k up who wants to kill everryone. But now its like .... Trying to decide whether they're good or evil. But thats pointless- they're neither. And having sex with your dead wife - ugh!! Totally, brilliantly shocking and horrible.

Sat, February 21st, 2009 5:40pm

Author
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Haha, thank you.

Yeah, this is the letter that will start the story off properly. And you got it exactly right, there not good or evil. Yes, very shocking, and it always will be. I'm glad you're loving it :) Thank you for reading and commenting!

Sat, February 21st, 2009 10:24am

AnNaMaRiE

WOW!! I acn't wait to read more!

Tue, February 24th, 2009 10:46pm

Author
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Thank you again! It does get more interesting :P

Tue, March 3rd, 2009 12:51am

PredatorsPrey

That was amazing and disturbing at the same time, lol. Colin seems just slightly more sane than Timmy. :D

Tue, March 3rd, 2009 8:17pm

Author
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Haha, yeah... He does. I love it when people call it amazing, so thank you once again! It gets more interesting later ond the letter I'm working on now is a very dark one written by someone every one knows! Thank you for reading and commenting!

Tue, March 3rd, 2009 5:34pm

yuu shindemura

"People don't believe in Heaven but they still fear evil"

yeah the wicked line you have! nice, it's very original, and you did very well on this, i gotta say pail, you really have been yourself with a fine writing skill! sugoi! (japanese word for amazing!)

Wed, March 4th, 2009 4:11pm

Author
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Haha, thank you so much! Yeah I love that line, I always try to be original. Thanks for reading mate.

Wed, March 4th, 2009 7:02pm

Midnight Rose

OMG! It's sort of repulsive at times, but fasinating! Love it! On to chapter 3! lol! :0)M

Sun, March 8th, 2009 1:01pm

Author
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Haha, yeah it does get very disgusting! Thank you once again, I hope you enjoy the rest of it!

Sun, March 8th, 2009 6:10am

Amour Eros

I love this style you have going. It's very captivating.

Mon, March 9th, 2009 3:03am

Author
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Thank you! I'm glad you're liking it! Cheers mate.

Mon, March 9th, 2009 6:30am

FairyWings

You have once again used many powerful words. What can I say? Your literary voice is so damn strong! You nailed it! The killings of his mother & friend was done perfectly. I liked the point of view you took as Timmy's friend. This is amazing! =D

Thu, April 30th, 2009 6:56am

Author
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Wow. Thank you once again :)

People always say my writing style is powerful because of the words I use and my imagination. And that's what I will always write like! This comment brought a smile to my face, thank you once again! :P

Thu, April 30th, 2009 11:23pm

sephiroth787

Great chapter, I'm really liking this. I love how even when Timmy kills his mother he still respects her. I also like the dark style in which is written. Good work!

Thu, January 21st, 2010 10:43pm

Author
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Thanks again dude. Yeah, I try to make Timmy likeable and feared. I'm glad you liked! Cheers.

Wed, January 27th, 2010 5:34pm

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