Chapter 3: Scarlette's Note

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Reads: 332
Comments: 17


Submitted: January 30, 2009

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AcidCandyJuvenile

Mental as always but I like it, like the last ones... Hmm... I want to know how all of them went so insane! Lol

Fri, January 30th, 2009 2:27pm

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I wouldn't call them insane, but there is definetly something bigger coming. Thanks for commenting. :)

Fri, January 30th, 2009 6:39am

John David Jordan

It's like reading some dark gospel, being written by a fanatical cult as they carry out their weird acts. It has a visceral, real sense that's hard to deny - I like it. It's got authenticity; when you read the letters left by people in real cults and groups, they sound just like this. It could have come straight from the FBI's files.

I'm interested to see if it turns out that they really do have supernatural connections, or if they're all just crazy. The element of having them talk about stuff when they were so young is very creepy. And I really like the idea of letters posted to random readers.

Fri, January 30th, 2009 3:53pm

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Thank you :)

I like the idea of it being a dark gospel, that's sort of what I'm aiming for. We'll find out one day if it's true or if they're just crazy. Straight from the FBI files, cool. Thank you for commenting, Cheers.

Fri, January 30th, 2009 7:26pm

Vicarious

Oh wow.

You've definitely made this all very convincing. Meaning, even though the whole idea is ridiculous, I believe it. I don't feel it is corny, or I don't believe it to be entirely false and completely insane.

This piece was very... eerie. How calm she is, when she's admitting that she will be killed, along with her disregard for her parent's feelings. I guess she figures it's for the better, and while she will be dead, she won't be "gone," in the sense.

Anyhow, as short as it is, it was very informative.

Fri, January 30th, 2009 6:19pm

Author
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Thank you once again.

I'm going for the realism in every letter. Even though a lot of the stuff in it can be unbelievable. I try to make it convincing, it has to be or it won't work.

Thank you so much, I'll let you know as soon as the next letter is up. It is a lot longer, but introduces a few new characters. Cheers.

Fri, January 30th, 2009 7:30pm

Night Write

I think you have a lot of talent! This is really intresting. A powerful imagination.

Fri, February 6th, 2009 5:49pm

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Thank you so much!

My imagination has grown massive because I have always kept an open mind, which means I'm never restricted, I can write what ever I want.

Thanks for reading. Cheers. :)

Fri, February 6th, 2009 6:15pm

RogueHost

I WAS BORN IN BRISBANE 2!!

Thu, February 12th, 2009 11:38am

Author
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Cool, I was born in Bunderberg, up north a bit but I now reside half an hour west of Ipswich. Thanks for the comment.

Thu, February 12th, 2009 5:21am

PoisonHeart

Yeah, this girls head is seriously fucked up. In the most entertaining way possible, of course.


"I will see the green blood soon." o_O

Fri, February 13th, 2009 10:30am

Author
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Haha, Thank you.

Fri, February 13th, 2009 5:14am

57pop

This is amazing, thank you for telling me about your story, I love it!

Mon, February 16th, 2009 3:48pm

Author
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Thank you, I'm glad you're loving it!

Mon, February 16th, 2009 7:52am

Angelsong

this girl is so dull and emotionless it scares me O_O wow, she can't wait for him to kill her??? i can wait forever x_X green blood...interesting. very interesting indeed. another great chapter! :P

Tue, February 17th, 2009 2:36am

Author
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Thank you. It gets even more interesting...... as you know. More emotion will come out of Scarlette later. Thanks for reading.

Mon, February 16th, 2009 7:01pm

ShadowsandMisery

Thats one seriously messed up girl, cold, and creepy, a dark soul indeed. I like her already, lol.

Thu, February 19th, 2009 10:43pm

Author
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Thanks.

Scarlette will have a huge role to play later, and she won't seem as cold as she does now ;)

Thu, February 19th, 2009 7:03pm

rorgon94

Is everyone in this book seriously this messed up? Brilliant, although not as good as the second letter.

Sat, February 21st, 2009 5:43pm

Author
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Thank you for the comment.

No, not everyone, but most of them ;-). It's not as good as the second letter, I know. It reveals a lot about Scarlette's character though. Colin's letter is probably the best letter so far, until Thomas's one. Thanks for reading.

Sat, February 21st, 2009 10:27am

AnNaMaRiE

Mentally stimulating! I like how you put these in order! It keeps people like me interested!

Tue, February 24th, 2009 10:49pm

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Haha, I'm glad it is keeping you interested. Mentally stimulating huh?, Thank you again my friend!

Tue, March 3rd, 2009 12:53am

LucidDreamer101

This is very intersting, having them all in a note format. It's something new, which is good cause I get tired of the same-old same-old.

This chapter kinda made me sad, I dunno why it just did. But I'm gonna move on and read the next chapter.

LucidDreamer

Wed, March 4th, 2009 2:23am

Author
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Yeah, writing in letter form is very different and refreshing. I usually don't like to do the same old stuff, I try to be as different as I can. It has a sort of sadness to it, you're the first person to see it that way. Thank you for your comment, it's very appreciated.

Tue, March 3rd, 2009 6:43pm

PredatorsPrey

Once again, amazing. These people sound quite interesting. :D

Wed, March 4th, 2009 10:49pm

Author
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Thank you, yeah I try to make all the characters very interesting and have their own opinions. Thanks for reading mate!

Wed, March 4th, 2009 6:57pm

yuu shindemura

kind of unique to be glad being killed, haha i remember our national hero in the phils, Dr. Jose Rizal, before he died he also wrote a letter to state his final farewell, he was scared. for scarlette, she' nicely agitated!!!XD great then!

\m/

Sat, March 7th, 2009 2:07pm

Author
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Haha, that was actually quite interesting :P Glad to be killed but still knows she'll be around. I heard that that kind of rock sign actually means, if it's pointed upright,it will catch the evil that someone sent towards you. And if you point it so it's vertical it means to give the evil, to dish it out. I find that interesting too. Thanks for reading mate, I appreciate it a lot.

Sat, March 7th, 2009 6:21am

Midnight Rose

Wow! That's all i have to say...:0)M

Sun, March 8th, 2009 1:06pm

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Haha, THANK YOU! :P

Sun, March 8th, 2009 6:10am

FairyWings

This was just so FREAKY! =O That word just came out naturally! This is the pinnacle of all evil. She welcomed Death in order to be the link to hell. I am totally impressed with the way you've developed Scarlette's character. It's shocking that she knew & agreed & was even happy to die.

Thu, April 30th, 2009 7:04am

Author
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Thanks for the great compliments once again :) I love Scarlette's character. There will be a lot more about her in this story, It is her and Timmy's story. Although it is also everyone else's as well ;)

Thanks again my friend!

Fri, May 1st, 2009 11:59pm

sephiroth787

Nice! This is so very cult like! Scarlette seem a bit naive and definitively trusts Timmy blindly, hope it works for her! It's funny how she seems all happy with the idea of being killed, like a Christmas present. Still is very realistic with a morbid supernatural air to it!

Thu, January 21st, 2010 10:49pm

Author
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Haha, thanks! You got it all spot on the money. But is she following blindly, or is there another side to her? Time will tell ;P It is cultish, that's the way I write Timmy's gang (or cult) Thanks dude!

Tue, February 2nd, 2010 9:23pm

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