Chapter 4: Sayont's Letter

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Reads: 384
Comments: 13


Submitted: February 04, 2009

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Vicarious

Aha, this is becoming more and more interesting by the letter. (:

Excellent plot development. I found it interesting that their only method of contacting one another is via letter, as if they're restricted to this method alone. I'm interested in seeing what happens with Timmy's sister; to see what sort of role she plays and whatnot. Also, the dog cleaning/eating part nauseated me a bit, which is good. xP

Keep up the good work, and do keep me updated.

Wed, February 4th, 2009 6:55pm

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Thank you. There definetly is a role Timmy's sister will play, but you'll have to wait and find out. As for the dog bit, I tried to make it as real as possible, it is pretty disgusting though. Thanks for reading, I'll keep you updated.

Wed, February 4th, 2009 7:28pm

AcidCandyJuvenile

Man the dog thing made me king of sick a bit,but cool. You are the master of gory. But over all you make me want to read more and add some more of Scarlette please.

Fri, February 6th, 2009 11:36am

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Thank you :) Stay tuned, more Scarlette will be coming, but not in the next part of the story, after the next letter you'll learn more.

Thank you for reading, Cheers. :)

Fri, February 6th, 2009 5:36am

Night Write

Oooh! Gorey and swift! An entertaining read! I've been bizzy but I'll come back and read again!

Fri, February 6th, 2009 6:01pm

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Thank you. :)

I love the gore, but only when it needs to be there :P

Thanks for reading, Cheers.

Fri, February 6th, 2009 6:16pm

PoisonHeart

Wow. The part where he throws the brain at the old lady. Hilarious. I love the fact that when most people would think 'that's unnecessarily gruesome' you seem to think 'that's perfect!'. I also think its funny that Soyant goes around calling people 'asian scum' when he himself is from China. I like Soyant's character, he might be my favorite so far and I'm looking forward so seeing how he interacts with the other characters. Keep up the good work, I'm enjoying it.

Fri, February 13th, 2009 10:55am

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Thank you again.

I thought that part would make a few people laugh, that's what I was going for :P Yeah, if I think of something in my mind that shouldn't really go into a story, I say "srew that" and write what I wanna. Makes the letters seem more private, like Timmy and his gang and couple of unlucky people were the only ones that read them. And therefor didn't care what they put into them.

Thank you so much once again, cheers.

Fri, February 13th, 2009 5:25am

Angelsong

wow, sayont is defintely an interesting character. i like gorey things, and this was definitely an exciting part to read. you're a great writer! ^.^

Tue, February 17th, 2009 2:40am

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Thank you, Sayont is interesting and a pleasure to write. I'm glad you like the gore, and you're a great writer too.

Mon, February 16th, 2009 7:03pm

ShadowsandMisery

Thats a odd twist, but brilliant Sayont is himself a chinese person ripping on one of his own like that. Then again anyone who serves Tommy, and even tommy himself are all f*cked in the head, lol. Course you would have to be to help Death in a war against Heaven and Hell.

Great tale, looking forward to more.

Thu, February 19th, 2009 10:52pm

Author
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Thank you!

That was an idea that just burst in my head one day, and I'm glad I put it in. Thank you so much.

Thu, February 19th, 2009 7:05pm

rorgon94

Yet another great addition to the letters series. I cant wait to see how this turns out.

Sat, February 21st, 2009 5:55pm

Author
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Thank you again my friend :) I have a lot planned in the next few letters after Sayont's story, and the next one should be up soon.

Sat, February 21st, 2009 10:30am

AnNaMaRiE

Lovin it!

Tue, February 24th, 2009 11:01pm

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Thank you once again :P

Tue, March 3rd, 2009 12:53am

yuu shindemura

hehe nice part! the gore and meats have become a special menu for this letter. ;) you've seen through me huh, hehe i also have this kind of way on the further chapters of my novel, though it's still different on this one. ^.^

anywayz timmy, hehe i mean pail, keep up on entertaining the rest of the readers!

Sat, March 7th, 2009 2:24pm

Author
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Haha, thank you! That's the first time someone has called me Timmy by mistake, that's very cool. And I will try to keep entertaining you all. Thank you for reading and commenting! Once again, very appreciated.

Sat, March 7th, 2009 6:30am

Midnight Rose

Stephen King eat your heart out!!! :0)M

Sun, March 8th, 2009 1:14pm

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Haha, damn right! Cheers for reading my friend!

Sun, March 8th, 2009 6:47am

Amour Eros

Oog, this made me feel weak. I don't take blood and gore too well. But this is good!

Mon, March 9th, 2009 11:16pm

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Haha, yeah I get that reaction from a lot of people. Thanks for reading! And commenting!

Mon, March 9th, 2009 10:46pm

FairyWings

Wow! The description of the meat was deliciously fantastic! Haha... I have no idea why I don't find that revolting. I love the way you're going with this. Your plot is churning out in a fabulous way. Keep it up! ^.^

Thu, April 30th, 2009 7:12am

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Haha, I'm glad you liked the dog bit :P Yep, always move the plot along ;) Thank you once again for these great comments :)

Sat, May 2nd, 2009 12:01am

sephiroth787

"But if she has a face like you, that can't be true." This was hilarious! And the part when he throws the brain to the lady (think fast!) almost made me pee in my pants! I like Sayont, he is gruesome and yet funny. In my opinion this is the best letter yet. It was funny but didn't lost his dark and gruesome air. It got the perfect balance! Very well done!

Thu, January 21st, 2010 11:09pm

Author
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Haha, yeah people always laugh at Sayont. I made him funny, but there's a very serious side to him. It's mixed in with the humour. Cheers for reading mate!

Tue, February 2nd, 2010 9:25pm

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