Waiting, just waiting.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

After several edits I am ready to let this one go.

Waiting
 
Waiting
Letting time pass by
Just wishing it would fly
 
Waiting
Sitting here quietly
I do nothing else lately
 
Waiting
For a time that’s still far away
I’m so sick of the delay
 
Waiting
Here I am just sitting
Waiting...
Still waiting.
 
Copyright © Rebecca Snow 2010


Submitted: April 26, 2010

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Ben Walker

I don't like to wait lol i wish time would fly when i'm waitng also

Mon, April 26th, 2010 8:49pm

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I think most people do!!

Wed, May 5th, 2010 11:53am

PaulChafer

I think this one is more you, more the kind of think I expect you to write, I wanted more though, but I am greedy for more depth. But, this seems personal, so maybe not putting more is advisable, on a site like this.

Do I like it? Yes, a ditty, but I like it.

Mon, April 26th, 2010 9:23pm

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To be honest I did struggle with how much depth to give this...this is kind of the stripped back version. I'll keep on working on this and maybe post an updated version at a later date.

Wed, May 5th, 2010 12:12pm

Mistress of Word Play

You did a beautiful job on this one Rebecca. I loved the repetition in the poem. Makes me wonder what you are waiting for. Stretches the imagination! Susan :)

Wed, April 28th, 2010 1:35am

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Thanks Susan, it has sat a long time on my desk waiting itself to be published!!

Wed, May 5th, 2010 11:58am

NazireC

stuck in an airport lately?

Thu, June 3rd, 2010 3:13pm

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