I was once innocent

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: War and Military  |  House: Booksie Classic

Jane has aloving mother, a strict but caring father and a fiance who she is deeply in love with.
How much better could her life be until her world is destroyed...

Chapter 1 (v.1) - I was once innocent

Submitted: January 16, 2009

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Submitted: January 16, 2009



A tear trickled down her pale cheek the pain was excruciating to the point her strong will was diminished to dust

She hated it and couldn’t believe it was possible to feel so much pain in one blow from such simple words.

Falling to her knee’s with a plea to god “why” …

They were gone and every second was like a life time of pain.

She didn’t understand , how could this happen how could god let it happen, ruining her pure love and destroying hope.

Those simple words kept repeating in her head to the point of collapse.

How could someone be hurt so much. Who could let that happen to someone let alone an innocent girl.

She sat there staring into nothing thinking nothing and finally feeling nothing .

She changed that day and the terrifying fact was she would get her revenge but not just by killing.

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