Chapter 2:

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Reads: 288
Comments: 3

Jared Prov.

“Hey Jared!” My new buddy, David yelled. “Are you coming up to my place? There’s going to be a lot of hot girls! Even Ally and Miranda,”

“Dude that would be great but-” I started to say.

“But what, are you saying you’re not going?! Man you’re taking a big risk,” David exclaimed.

“Man I got to go home,” I said deciding I wasn’t going to waste my time arguing with him and so then iheaded home.

“Fine keep on walking,” David shouted. “I will see you tomorrow at the party then!”

Even though I had only been living and going to this school in California for only a few days I still had learned a lot about how things run here. David and his buddies I had learned were the guys all the girls wanted well Allison and Miranda were the most popular girls and all the guys were dumfounded when they were around them. Allison and Miranda loved it all. They actually were booth kinda snotty and thought they could run the show for everything. It wasn’t really hard figuring out why they were so popular. Allison’s Dad was a big time lawyer and her Mom a famous fashion designer. Well Miranda’s parents had been all time champion couple skaters. Now they were owners of the hoot company. Also the girls were really hot.

Arielle Prov.

“Arielle get down here!” Mom yelled.

As soon as I heard Mom’s voice I beelined downstairs. When Mom talked that way which was very rarely, I knew something was wrong.

“What?”I asked as I entered the dining room kitchen.

“Where’s your sister?” Mom asked in a frightening voice.

“Umm,”I said searching the room with my sea-green eyes darting everywhere.”I thought she was eating her snack,”

“Well you thought wrong Arielle,” Mom said almost in tears which was really scaring me.

“Mom did she sneak outside?”I asked moving towards the back door.

“What I don’t get Arielle is why you left your little sister down here by herself!” Mom yelled and this time all the tears came pouring out like a river.

“Mom I’m so sorry. I didn’t know she would leave her spot!” I exclaimed. “Now can we just go look?”

Please Comment!!!!!!! It's probably boring right now but i'm just trying to keep it flowing.And in the next chapters hopefully i can make it better.Like i said please comment!Tell me what you thought?!Thanxs alot all you guys who commented.It really made my day better since my Favorite Aunt found out she has cancer......

Submitted: June 04, 2010

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I dont think its boring i really like your story.Great chapter i cant wait for the next one to see what will happen. please update me THANKZ.

Fri, June 4th, 2010 9:42am


Awww you're to sweet Seoul23!!!!!!Thanxs for commenting once again!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fri, June 4th, 2010 3:30am


I enjoy reading this!
It already sounds interesting so don't worry!!
Update soon:)

Fri, June 4th, 2010 4:10pm



Tue, June 8th, 2010 12:19am

Vampire slayer

I am really enjoying this. You have talent, don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Keep me updated:)

Mon, June 14th, 2010 9:19pm

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