An Autumnal Dream

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A set of dreams as autumnal cloud
Drifts again and again-
I bought all unplugged flowers,
perches a flower basket again and again

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Submitted: January 31, 2013

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Stormbird Throneshaker

Wow! A beautiful poem with an amazingly awesome picture...or is it the other way around? I'll just say both ways and leave it at that and give it a vote as well!

Fri, February 1st, 2013 3:26am

smruti

it is outstanding....really shaleheen u r very very good at writing...a master piece from u...excellent job.

Fri, February 1st, 2013 4:36am

lauricula

Another beautiful poem, I expected nothing less. The imagery and emotion was strong. I wish I could offer more feedback but I'm not much of an expert on poetry.

Fri, February 1st, 2013 5:04am

meenakshi sharma

lovely poem .. way of expressing was so nice . good job.i like it :) :)

Fri, February 1st, 2013 12:42pm

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thanks for appreciation.........

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:59am

dynamic12

Good imagery and wonderful choice of words. ..beautiful poem :)

Fri, February 1st, 2013 4:54pm

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thanks for appreciation.........

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:55am

smircle

Beautiful imagery and wonderful choice of background :) Really liked

Fri, February 1st, 2013 7:08pm

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thanks for appreciation.........

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:54am

glitter snow426

oh, very special, beautiful and WARMEST DELIGHT!! love this, you certainly made my evening, very memorable indeed!

Fri, February 1st, 2013 9:53pm

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oh.. great... very inspiring............

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:54am

Waiting For You

I like both the picture and the poem! Really great job :)

Fri, February 1st, 2013 10:33pm

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thanks for appreciation.........

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:53am

Coralie

The picture and poem duo was something completely new to me on here! How did you do that? It added so much to the awe this whole poem left me with; this was a truly beautiful piece of work. It left me longing for it to be autumn yet again! Great job. C:

Fri, February 1st, 2013 11:30pm

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thanks for ur appreciation.........

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:52am

SGBanks

The picture, the word choice, the flow, the imagery, the poem itself all created a stir of feelings from reading this. I believe this poem broke boundaries if any to really prove how amazing of a writer you are.

-SG

Sat, February 2nd, 2013 2:43am

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very inspiring ..........

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:52am

Cody S. D. Crum

Well done. Some context word choice was a little different, but not altogether wrong. It did not stop this from being a well described poem of love and longing.
Would you mind if I posted a link to this poem on my Facebook fan page Krinler Literature ? I would name you the author and show it to my fans there for them to read you here.
Good writing = )

Sat, February 2nd, 2013 2:49am

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thanks for appreciation.........

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:51am

animefreak77L

this was a really good poem. i love the picture u added to it :) keep up the amazing work

Sat, February 2nd, 2013 3:59pm

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thanks for appreciation.........

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:49am

Moira Garcia

I loved the pic, it really set the mood

Sat, February 2nd, 2013 4:13pm

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thanks for appreciation.........

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:49am

Matthew Zabala

I love the picture you used for this poem, bro. It really adds to the imagery you use. It makes me want to go fishing. That's my favorite hobby...it even trumps writing! I may have told you this before, but your writing style is very similar to the transcendentalists, some of my favorite American writers. Good job here, brother.

Thanks for sharing this.

Sat, February 2nd, 2013 5:24pm

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thanks Zabala for your very inspiring comments.........

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:48am

tamara35

So beautiful and romantic. Thanks for the invite. Please always do. I also liked the idea of uploading a picture next to your poems.
Thanks for sharing your wonderful poems with us.

Sat, February 2nd, 2013 7:44pm

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thanks for appreciation.........

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:47am

jmurch

This is beauty in romance capturing a moment of the heart. You are majestic at pulling words together beautifully, my friend of the pen...

Sun, February 3rd, 2013 6:44pm

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hello friend thanks for inspiring ............

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:44am

ashi17

Beautiful imagery, very well written. Good work Shaleheen !!

Mon, February 4th, 2013 5:57am

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thanks Ashi.......

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:42am

Pirate Bug

What another beautiful poem. The imagery you created was wonderful! Well done...MPB

Mon, February 4th, 2013 6:18pm

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thanks MPB...........

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:41am

Basilia

Very good to read one more poem of yours and I guess it should be dreamt not dreamed.I thoroughly enjoyed your poem and the way your present, by embedding your work in beautiful background adds more beauty to it. Keep writing :)

Wed, February 6th, 2013 2:08pm

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thanks ...
dreamt/dreamed both are correct...
thanks for your comment........

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:40am

aruntp

brilliantly written. this poem emits sweet fragrance of the season. nicely presented.

Thu, February 7th, 2013 6:23am

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thanks for appreciation.........

Mon, March 11th, 2013 11:39am

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