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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Hey guys, I didn't write this author's note earlier but I need comments guys C'mon please encourage me...So I have a guessing Game Question for you guys.

Who do you guys think hit April and Why?...I'd really love to know guys please don't just read and pass..comment.The winner or the person with the best comment gets a surprise Inbox from me ;-)...so yeah guys tell me....love ya.

Chapter 6 (v.1) - Surprise Surprise

Submitted: January 21, 2016

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Submitted: January 21, 2016




Grams have been admitted to the hospital because her illnesss has gotten worse, I just pray nothing happens to her because she's all I have and I don't want to think about what I'm going do if I dare loose her.

I just pray and hope her cancer isn't back and the doctor wasn't lying when he said it was minor illness.I fidget on my bed not being able to sleep, I would say I'm worried about grams which I am but I have this crazy feeling that something bad as happened.

I try and force myself to sleep but I don't, I try imagining things in my head to keep me busy but that weird feeling couldn't let me be.

I finally get fed up and got up from my bed.

maybe if I take a stroll down the streets it would clear my head a bit.I wash my face and run my hands through my brown hair and started outside my house.

The cool breeze outside washes over me and I remember how hot my room was, maybe that's why I couldn't sleep? I walk a little further to the streets then turn back to the direction of my house, everywhere is dark and quiet like my damaged brain,how I could give anything to get my memory back, I've tried really hard to remember at least what led to my memory loss and how I survived the accident but they have all been futile, I only see flashes in my dreams and some of them......

I hold that thought when I see a girl's body lying helplessly on my door step.

What the hell?! I move towards the body slowly and cautiously and my eyes about bulge out of the socket when I see the helpless girl is April.


"April?" She doesn't say anything or move so I tap her lightly on the shoulder. "April?, you okay?" my first initial thought is that she's passed out drunk but checking her pulse and her temperature, I knew she was unconscious and not drunk.

I carry her immediately in my arms to the inside of my room and lie her on the bed.

I raise her leg at least 12 inches above the bed and loosen the belt on her jeans.I am as shocked as hell to have seen her on my doorstep.Thousands of questions are running through my head.

Was she coming to my house before she she became unconscious?.

Why was she unconscious?

How'd she know my place?.

Or did anyone dump her here, on my doorstep?

oh god, I am as confused as hell! I check her airway to make sure there is no obstruction of air flow. "Hey April, Can you hear me?"I get no response so I position my cheek close to her mouth, and I am washed with a wave of relief when I feel her breath against my cheek.


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