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I Am Victoria Jackson


If they were to ever make a movie of this, I know just how It will start. The camera is looking down at an open space packed playground. Its late afternoon, lunchtime at West Brampton High. The sun shines brightly across the wide green field. Everything is lively, apart from a peculiar corner.


Now the camera goes into the crowd at eye level and moves around. Checking what's going on. You've got your usual loud and playful boys, tossing a muddy football all over the place with huge force, you've got your skimpy girls, prancing about with there skirts just beneath their bums, owning the place with their annoyingly high pitched voices. And then the 'normal' kids walking about casually but managing to fit in.


The camera stops at one particular part of the whole field. It consists of two living things. One, is a huge oak tree, with a huge jacket of leaves above it; the other is a girl. The girl is 15, wears a fitted pair of black school trousers and a normal white polo shirt with the school badge sown on the left side of the shirt. In her hands lay a book. She's medium in height, alright looking, her long dark brown hair is tied up into a neat bun with a simple black hair tie. Her grey eyes are transfixed directly towards the page in front of her.


From the expression on her face you could easily tell she didn't like being where she is, because she's alone and its boring. But its the only option she had other than staying in class and helping Mr Yanks prepare for the next lesson. Take a long look at her. Nothing special is she? No jet black silky soft hair. No beautiful, golden skin complexion. Her ears are just far too small. Her eye lashes are too short, her lips are too plain, the most interesting thing about her Is that she's oblivious. Not dumb, but oblivious, about what's going to be happening to her. Her little world is about to get seriously weird, but she has absolutely no idea.


She thinks its just another normal, friday afternoon at school- the poor girl.


She's me : Victoria Jackson

Submitted: May 19, 2013

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thats a good beginning. I like it!

Thu, May 23rd, 2013 12:07am


Thank you!

Thu, May 23rd, 2013 4:45pm


Good intro!!! Keep me updated!!!!

Sat, June 1st, 2013 12:24am


Sure love :)

Fri, June 7th, 2013 2:40pm

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