Your Smile!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

His smile and the effect it has on me...

Your Smile!
Your smile is a beautiful smile
It comes straight from your heart
Your smile shines like a beacon
The love in it tears me apart
 
Your smile shows in your eyes
It’s pure and joyous to see
Your smile brightens up my life
Its pure love just for me
 
Your smile can brighten the darkest day
Your smile can take my pain away
Your smile just turns me upside down
Your smile in which I could forever drown
 
You smile at me and I am bowled over
At how it changes your face
Such love and joy and happiness
Such dignity and grace
 
Your smile can take me through the darkest nights
Your smile makes me cope with the horrible fights
Your smile does so much you see
Your smile full of love just for me


Submitted: May 19, 2008

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Pratibha

*tears in my eyes*
Why?
I am over whelmed with the honesty and the comparisons and positivity and the love .....

i loved every line....i don't know how to express what this poem did to me but my son's face danced in front of my eyes....

so pure and so divine....

Tue, May 20th, 2008 3:52am

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thank you for this very lovely comment. I wrote this for my love but as your sons face appeared in front of you I realised it could apply to anyones smile that is important to you. I am really glad you like it.
take care
snow x

Mon, May 19th, 2008 10:04pm

gerabel

a lovely piece. Amazing what a smile can do, isn't it?!! keep those smiles coming, snow!.....Jerry

Tue, May 20th, 2008 11:37am

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thanks jerry. a smile is an amazing thing it can light up somebody's day. i like to think i smile a lot, but i do have a terrible frown, lol.
snow x

Tue, May 20th, 2008 8:57am

Lacey Cummings

Love this one Snow! This one puts a smile in my own heart. Your last two poems posted had shown such a wide range of emotions and you did them both justice. Such talent you have!

Tue, May 20th, 2008 2:17pm

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Lacey thanks for this really lovely comment. it one of the nicest i have had. Really glad it made you smile.
your friend
snow xx

Tue, May 20th, 2008 9:16am

apodiform

This poem made me smile even sitting here at my computer at work. It's so amazing how much one smile can do to change our day around. And if it's from the person we love....ah, heaven my friend, heaven! Wonderful!~Em

Tue, May 20th, 2008 3:39pm

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Thank you Em for this lovely comment. I am glad it made you smile, especially at work. A smile can change a bad day and as you say if its from the one you love...........ahhhhh.
take care
snow x

Tue, May 20th, 2008 9:21am

Jbortti

That's wonderful poem is we need. A smile that can brighten the darkest day , this is so good when in hard times.

Wed, May 21st, 2008 4:34pm

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indeed juliano a smile can brighten up the worst of days especially when it is full of love.
speak soon, hugs
snow xx

Wed, May 21st, 2008 9:50am

K. Baltimore

Isn't it wonderful when a simple smile from that special someone can make you feel as if you're the only person in the world. Their smile has the ability to make you feel important in their life; especially when you're the very reason why they are smiling.

Sat, May 24th, 2008 10:10pm

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funny quiche this comment made me smile. he is the very reason i smile and it makes me so happy to know that the reason he smiles is when he sees me in the morning. a smile from that special person in your life is just........there are no words to express how it makes me feel. thanks for reading.
snow

Sat, May 24th, 2008 3:51pm

seesawmae

this is so wonderful! it did such a great job! keep it up! :)

Sun, May 25th, 2008 11:43pm

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thanks for this lovely comment. i am really glad it made you smile.
snow =)

Mon, May 26th, 2008 2:53am

mum55

hi snow a really wonderfull peice......happy days julietx

Sun, September 28th, 2008 5:14pm

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thanks juliet. its good to hear from you. hope all is well with you.
take care
snow x

Tue, September 30th, 2008 12:03pm

Azucena

I think this is a positive poem straight from the heart.
A smile from someone special always makes you feel happy.

Tue, November 11th, 2008 6:31am

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thank you azucena for this lovely comment. that smile brightens my darkest days without fail.
take care
snow

Wed, November 12th, 2008 9:18am

krissibear

Wow very amazing poem, come check out mine

Wed, November 26th, 2008 5:22pm

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thank you krissibear. will be sure to come by.
snow =)

Wed, November 26th, 2008 9:32am

Rocky

Being in love with somebody is a great thing.

Beautiful poem

Fri, January 23rd, 2009 2:23am

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rocky thank you for this lovely comment. it is as true now as the day it happened.
sophie =)

Mon, January 26th, 2009 9:55am

apodiform

i've found this poem again and still love it. l'amour *happy sigh*

Mon, January 26th, 2009 10:01pm

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Thank you Em. I admit to this being one of my favourites. it always reminds me of him and makes me smile. l'amour indeed =)
soph x

Tue, January 27th, 2009 12:45pm

CrazyGurl01

that was adorable...well writen and loving.

Wed, February 18th, 2009 12:57am

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thank you. his smile still has the power to turn me to jelly, such is the power of my love for him.
take care
soph x

Tue, February 24th, 2009 12:31pm

Hanna A

ahh so sweet and tells you all you need to know by someones smile. :)

Thu, February 19th, 2009 1:12pm

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thank you hanna for this lovely comment. isnt it the truth that a smile tells you all you need to know. one glance of his smile and i am happy for the day. =)
sophie

Tue, February 24th, 2009 12:22pm

ilovemyable

aww that's cute...
i wrote a poem before about my bf's voice
lol

Fri, February 20th, 2009 5:28pm

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thank you for this comment. it was written with his smile in my mind.
i will be sure to come read your poem.
sophie

Tue, February 24th, 2009 12:21pm

rustyfootprints88

cool,smiles,happy,fun,laughter,excitement,SMILES.

Sat, February 28th, 2009 12:33am

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thanks. as long as there are plenty of smiles and lots of love thats all that matters.
soph

Fri, March 13th, 2009 10:33am

theunloved

WOW! that was great! it was rhymyy and still sounded beautiful, i loved it!

Sun, March 8th, 2009 3:49am

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thank you for this lovely comment. i think the love in it is what makes it so special to me.
soph

Fri, March 13th, 2009 10:31am

Luanne Spinks

This is beautifully written and I enjoyed the imagery very much. I wish you well.

Thu, March 19th, 2009 7:55pm

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Thank you Luanne for taking the time to read and comment. i am glad you enjoyed my poem.
take care
sophie

Mon, March 23rd, 2009 11:51am

kodwobrumpon

meaningful murmurs of a smile - beautifully crafted

Wed, March 25th, 2009 9:13pm

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thank you for this lovely comment.
even now after the length of time we have been together his smile is still the thing i get up for.
take care
sophie

Fri, March 27th, 2009 10:07am

Laura9409

Wow!!!! This is so good, i really liked it, such a sweet poem. check out some of my stuffs :)

Thu, April 23rd, 2009 3:32pm

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thank you for your lovely comment laura. will be sure to stop by and check your work out.
take care
sophie :+)

Tue, May 19th, 2009 9:44am

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