Submitted: May 19, 2008
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a lovely piece. Amazing what a smile can do, isn't it?!! keep those smiles coming, snow!.....Jerry
Tue, May 20th, 2008 11:37amLove this one Snow! This one puts a smile in my own heart. Your last two poems posted had shown such a wide range of emotions and you did them both justice. Such talent you have!
Tue, May 20th, 2008 2:17pmThis poem made me smile even sitting here at my computer at work. It's so amazing how much one smile can do to change our day around. And if it's from the person we love....ah, heaven my friend, heaven! Wonderful!~Em
Tue, May 20th, 2008 3:39pmThat's wonderful poem is we need. A smile that can brighten the darkest day , this is so good when in hard times.
Wed, May 21st, 2008 4:34pmIsn't it wonderful when a simple smile from that special someone can make you feel as if you're the only person in the world. Their smile has the ability to make you feel important in their life; especially when you're the very reason why they are smiling.
Sat, May 24th, 2008 10:10pm
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funny quiche this comment made me smile. he is the very reason i smile and it makes me so happy to know that the reason he smiles is when he sees me in the morning. a smile from that special person in your life is just........there are no words to express how it makes me feel. thanks for reading.
snow
this is so wonderful! it did such a great job! keep it up! :)
Sun, May 25th, 2008 11:43pmhi snow a really wonderfull peice......happy days julietx
Sun, September 28th, 2008 5:14pmI think this is a positive poem straight from the heart.
A smile from someone special always makes you feel happy.
Wow very amazing poem, come check out mine
Wed, November 26th, 2008 5:22pmBeing in love with somebody is a great thing.
Beautiful poem
i've found this poem again and still love it. l'amour *happy sigh*
Mon, January 26th, 2009 10:01pmthat was adorable...well writen and loving.
Wed, February 18th, 2009 12:57amahh so sweet and tells you all you need to know by someones smile. :)
aww that's cute...
i wrote a poem before about my bf's voice
lol
cool,smiles,happy,fun,laughter,excitement,SMILES.
Sat, February 28th, 2009 12:33amWOW! that was great! it was rhymyy and still sounded beautiful, i loved it!
Sun, March 8th, 2009 3:49amThis is beautifully written and I enjoyed the imagery very much. I wish you well.
Thu, March 19th, 2009 7:55pmmeaningful murmurs of a smile - beautifully crafted
Wed, March 25th, 2009 9:13pmWow!!!! This is so good, i really liked it, such a sweet poem. check out some of my stuffs :)
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*tears in my eyes*
Tue, May 20th, 2008 3:52amWhy?
I am over whelmed with the honesty and the comparisons and positivity and the love .....
i loved every line....i don't know how to express what this poem did to me but my son's face danced in front of my eyes....
so pure and so divine....
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thank you for this very lovely comment. I wrote this for my love but as your sons face appeared in front of you I realised it could apply to anyones smile that is important to you. I am really glad you like it.
Mon, May 19th, 2008 10:04pmtake care
snow x