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BTW (Before the Wolf) /Camille's Point of View:

"Come on, Camille," says my best friend, Sasha, "we're never going to get to the party at this rate."

"Hold your horses," I reply, "I'm almost ready."

"You said that five minutes ago," she complains.

"Well, I mean it this time, chill girl," I say as I hear her mutter under her breath.

"If you want to go, go already, I'll walk it isn't that far away," I say ruefully. 

"If you really want me to go ahead. . ."

"Yeah, you might as well it'll stop your complaining," I mutter.

"Alright, I'll see you there," she says happily.

"Whatever," I say.

I hear the door slam close and I sigh out of relief. I am adding the last dash of blush and little more liquid eye liner. I look myself over one last time and grab my purse. My cell phone beeps. It was Sasha.

"You done yet, girlie," she texts.

"Yep, OMW," I reply.

"kk," she replies.

I sigh again. I grab a long and blue coat and go out. Who knew the next moment I would be attacked by a werewolf! I feel something clasp onto my back and bite my neck. I scream in pain and horror. It felt like a giant bug bite. I feel it stop biting and gently put me on the ground. I have a couple spasm attacks. Next thing, I see is a huge wolf-like man creature. I remember his eyes are a dark olive green and I see his human form.

"Sorry, Human, I didn't mean to bite you," he says in a calm voice.

He rips a piece from his shirt (that was left enough to cover his hot body) and ties it on my neck.He lifts me in his arms and carries me away. I fall asleep human and wake up a changed person.

Submitted: May 20, 2014

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Xander Barry Leon

Your novel has great potential the only thing i would say is give more detail and check for spelling. It helps if you describe what she is wearing and the location she is in or if she felt as if she was being followed or if the attack just happened while she walked. Will continue to read and comment.

Tue, May 19th, 2015 4:17am


Thanks for reading and I shall edit it. It is a work in progress as everything I try to work on is.

Mon, May 18th, 2015 11:32pm


A very nice start, Little Wolf! You are making me get into another book... I really don't have time for that, but your hook caught me well & good!

Thu, June 8th, 2017 5:45am


Thanks, I'm glad you liked my story.

Wed, June 7th, 2017 11:00pm


My only question is, "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to bite you?", Really?!? How does one accidentally bite someone else? That part was a bit incredible!

Thu, June 8th, 2017 5:48am


Well, he is a werewolf, it happens by accident. He was attracted by her scent. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Wed, June 7th, 2017 11:02pm

the winning heart

The story is a different thought. The language used is fantastic.The story takes us into a different world all together. Grammatically its flawless. All the best

Thu, February 8th, 2018 1:15am


Thanks for the read and the comment, I appreciate it. I'm glad that you enjoyed my story as well.

Thu, February 8th, 2018 9:45pm

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