Chapter 11:

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic

Reads: 209
Comments: 4

I turn onto my side, and force my eyes open. I feel for my phone on the bed side table.

"Mmm. Hello?" I say groggily.

"Ashlyn? It's me. Monica."

"Monica? Why are you calling me? At-" I look over at my clock. "At nine? On a Saturday?"

"Because, I want you to come with me to see if the baby's okay."

"You mean to the obstetrician?"

"Yeah, I don't want to go by myself. I'm scared." I sigh. I can't believe I'm doing this.

"Yeah, okay."

"I'll pick you up in half an hour," she says and she hangs up with a click.

I groan, and swing my legs over my bed. I walk to the bathroom, and take a shower. I put on some foundation, and mascara deciding to go natural today.

I braid my hair to the side in a fishtail braid, and dress in a blue plaid shirt dress  that buttons up. I take my tan belt, and wrap it around my waist, and put on tan gladiator sandals.


I hold her hand, while the doctor puts the gel on her slight baby bump. We see the baby on the moniter, and my breath catches in my throat. There's no thrumming sound coming from the moniter. That should be the baby's heart.

"What's that mean? Why are you guys looking so, so, upset!?" Monica asks, her voice becoming more frantic, and she squeezes my hand tighter.

"Ms.Blues, you've had a miscarriage."

"What?! No, no, no, no!" She says, as she bursts into tears.

Submitted: June 08, 2011

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bad thinqqs keep happeninqq :(

Wed, June 8th, 2011 1:24pm


Yeah, but maybe good things to come (:

Thu, June 9th, 2011 3:03pm


aww thats so sad :'( my heart goes out to her!! she has had the worst time latly please kmu it was great again just a little bit short :( ahwell loved it!!

Wed, June 8th, 2011 11:34pm


Sorry, I know it was short !

Thu, June 9th, 2011 3:05pm


Oh man that's really terrible! This is a really good story! kmu

Wed, June 15th, 2011 3:20am


I shall (:

Wed, June 15th, 2011 7:35pm


poor monica!! good story so far tho! KMU and upd8 soon!

Tue, June 21st, 2011 2:07am


I'll try my darnest !

Tue, June 21st, 2011 3:30pm

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