Chapter 2:

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Comments: 6

"Morning beautiful." I look out the windows and realize it's light out. He starts to walk over to me so I scoot as far away as my arms stretch. "Come on now, I ain't gonna hurt you."

"Get, away! What do you want with me? Ransom? The pleasure of killing a teenage girl?" He smiles sinisterly.

"You." He bends down and unties me and I make a break for it as I stand up. But he grabs my ankles, and I fall and he pulls me toward him, as I scream. I turn onto my back and he presses his mouth to mine and kisses me. I push, and kick, and punch. But nothing stops him. When he's off my mouth, I cover my face with my hands. "Stop, please!" I say, but it comes out muffled. He yanks off my hands and drags me to the couch. He picks me up and shoves me on there. Then he kisses me again.

Then I punch him in the face. He pulls away, and I gasp. "How dare you," he says. Then, he punches me and I black out.

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At home, Ashlyn's mother makes coffee for Officer Lankhart. She comes in with his cup. "Thank you. Okay, so Mrs. Tanner, when was the last time you saw your daughter?" Officer Lankhart asks with his note pad and pen.

"Yesterday morning before school." He writes down some things in his note pad.

 "Do you know of anyone who would want to hurt her? Was she fighting with anyone?"

Mrs. Tanner shakes her head. "Not that I know of."

"No fights with a friend? Does she have a boyfriend?"

"Um yes, Tray Sheen. He's a good boy, he would never do this. He loves her."

"Okay, well that's all we need for now, Mrs. Tanner. Thank you for the coffee," Officer Lankhart says as he walks out the door. He gets in his squad car, and drives to Tray Sheen's.

Submitted: March 19, 2011

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Tear On A Rose

Updated (:

Sat, March 19th, 2011 4:01pm


This is a good novel you should keep it up.

Tue, March 22nd, 2011 6:59am

Tear On A Rose

Thanks (:

Tue, March 22nd, 2011 7:47am



Tue, April 26th, 2011 1:56pm


Will doo (:

Tue, April 26th, 2011 4:23pm

Dannika Summers

So it switches POVs? Coolio!
Good job :)

Sat, May 14th, 2011 11:13pm


Yeah, I guess it does ! Haha (:

Sat, May 14th, 2011 8:38pm


this kind of reminds me of a movie i watched on lifetime a few weeks ago only this is better!

Wed, June 15th, 2011 3:02am


Woo ! Accomplishment (:

Wed, June 15th, 2011 7:32pm

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