Pain

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a poem of my pain and how I felt when one of my feinds dissided i was an not wherth his time.

 

One day and one night

A wolf will fight for its life

Will he live or die

There is a blade in my heart that with every beat lets me bleed and yet I do not cry as I slowly die. This blade is letting my blood rain as it slowly drains and yet I still have no care for a thing  with every pump and every breath the pain quickly escapes as the crimson liquid flows. I fined pace, and hope that everyone and thing I’ve wronged can find that I am kind.If death takes me I will go but I will not be afraid for it will be my time and that is the only thing I fear.

 


Submitted: August 15, 2013

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SugarPawStories

Brilliant I love wolves I liked

Thu, August 15th, 2013 7:03pm

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Thack you for the comments on both my poem and short story.

Thu, August 15th, 2013 2:23pm

Gina Earp

The opening was captivating.
One day and one night
A wolf will fight for it's life
I like it :)

Fri, August 16th, 2013 10:17am

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Thanks that's what i was goin for(=

Sun, August 18th, 2013 7:35am

iola ried

This is brilliant! I love it! :)

Sun, August 18th, 2013 12:28am

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Thanks man.

Sun, August 18th, 2013 7:36am

Hotaru

I like how you started off the poem. When I was reading this, I felt like it described me in a way. lots of times I have felt like the wolf in the poem. It's nice to know i'm not the only one that felt that way.

Sun, January 12th, 2014 6:39am

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Hey, like my grandma says, "it's better to wright then to fight." she use to tell me that when I felt so low.

Mon, January 13th, 2014 7:11am

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