Can't Live without you

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It is my second song dedicated to my first and last love...

Can't live without you,how do I make my heart understand it
Can't escape from loneliness,finding you away from me everytime.(2 Times)

In each way i find you ,you became destination of my each journey.
Want to forget you,but for this too i had to remember you.
When I think of you,it leaves tears in my eyes.
My day begins with you,My day ends with you.

Can't live without you,how do I make my heart understand it
Can't escape from loneliness,finding you away from me everytime.(1 Time)

You are not with me ,then why there is a feeling of being you around me.
when you got away from me,i realized that i was living for you.
when i saw you for the first time,my heart fell in love with you.
At that moment I never thought,my heart could be broken.

Can't live without you,how do I make my heart understand it
Can't escape from loneliness,finding you away from me everytime.

I am feeling compassionate for getting a glance of you,even I forgot to breath without you.
Every happiness is strange for me,I made pain my friend.
Now I am running away from myself,Now I am searching you everywhere.
I can't fight with myself anymore,I can't live without you anymore.

Can't live without you,how do I make my heart understand it,
Can't escape from loneliness,finding you away from me everytime.(2 Times)

Submitted: April 26, 2013

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have faith in purple

love this poem it truly strikes heart

Sat, April 27th, 2013 2:12am

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Thanks for the comment

Fri, April 26th, 2013 10:25pm

Lily Jaymes

wooo hooo, good job!! :)

Sat, April 27th, 2013 6:17am

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Thanks for the comment

Fri, April 26th, 2013 11:29pm

Lisa Ayers

I can picture this as a slow pop song. It has a romantic and melancholy feel.

You did an aweome job!

Thanks for the invite. Hope to connect with you soon.

Sat, April 27th, 2013 6:30am

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Thanks Lisa

Mon, April 29th, 2013 12:31am

Criss Sole

I would really love to hear this as a song now. I really enjoyed reading this.

Sat, April 27th, 2013 7:54am

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Thanks Criss

Mon, April 29th, 2013 12:31am

ashi17

Melancholic and lovely good work!

Sat, April 27th, 2013 8:54am

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Thanks ashi17

Mon, April 29th, 2013 12:32am

sneeding

This is great. I love poems like this but I found myself humming it lol

Sat, April 27th, 2013 12:04pm

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Thanks sneeding.

Sun, April 28th, 2013 10:46pm

JBrewer

Great job with this one, Well written.

JB
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Sat, April 27th, 2013 2:25pm

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Thanks JBrewer.

Sun, April 28th, 2013 10:44pm

Entity

Very well done. I enjoyed this. It was rather simply worded, but painted a picture more vivid than most I've ever read. Excellent:)

Sat, April 27th, 2013 2:43pm

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Thanks Entity

Sun, April 28th, 2013 10:40pm

TheTeddybearNinja

This one is just as good (if not better) than the other one you wrote. In my opinion, this should make that person feel special. This is absolutely wonderful, Kudos once again :)

Sat, April 27th, 2013 3:05pm

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Thanks Teddy

Sun, April 28th, 2013 10:38pm

domi823

Aww. I like this :) Really well written! Good job!

Sat, April 27th, 2013 8:47pm

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Thanks domi823.

Sun, April 28th, 2013 10:35pm

bella singh

very nice.. Keep it up okay.. Writing something is the best way to express yourself, your feelings and thoughts.. Soo i like your work,, and good job! :)

Sat, April 27th, 2013 9:12pm

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Thanks Bella

Sun, April 28th, 2013 10:35pm

synesthesia

Inspirational and moving, beautiful work : )

Sun, April 28th, 2013 7:16pm

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Thanks synesthesia.

Sun, April 28th, 2013 10:34pm

ValeriyaPonomar

Really beautiful. Moving and heartwarming. If you can attach and audio for this song, it would help me picture the flow a bit more :)

Sun, April 28th, 2013 7:42pm

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Thanks Valeria.I would come up thi audio soon .

Sun, April 28th, 2013 10:34pm

badhaas7

This is really good. I did notice a few grammatical and spelling mistakes. For example, you said "You are not with me, then why there is a feeling of being you around me" and I'm pretty sure you meant to say "you are not with me, then why is there a feeling of you being around me"
There were simple spelling mistakes as well, but to the point that I couldn't understand the point.
Good job (:

Mon, April 29th, 2013 2:09am

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Thanks for the comment.I am not that good with my grammer but thanks for pointing it out.It will help me to improve.

Sun, April 28th, 2013 10:33pm

smircle

This is really sweet! There were a few spelling/ grammar mistakes, but they can easily be fixed. I found the description really sweet, your "first and last love." Im not a romantic person generally, but it's cute. I could imagine it as a song :)

Mon, April 29th, 2013 5:48pm

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Thanks smircle...

Mon, April 29th, 2013 10:22pm

The Coyote

It's really touching. I wish the last love interest I had felt this way about me...

Tue, April 30th, 2013 12:23am

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thanks Coyote

Mon, April 29th, 2013 10:23pm