BreakDown

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BreakDown

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Book by: vampiress

Genre: Romance

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Book by: vampiress

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Genre: Romance

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Summary

your just gonna have to read and this is just a rougth draft so i need all help all comments bad and good just tell me what floats your boat with this story

Summary

your just gonna have to read and this is just a rougth draft so i need all help all comments bad and good just tell me what floats your boat with this story

Chapter Content - ver.1

Submitted: May 08, 2009

Reads: 146

Comments: 2

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Chapter Content - ver.1

Submitted: May 08, 2009

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Theres a gilr named Ellie. She was born into a not so peachy clean place. Her father, a gambler whos always drinking and a mother who loves her but..has to father her dad around to make sure he doesnt get into trouble. She was basically alone since she was 7yrs old.But there was this one boy a neighbor, he was cute, shy but thats what made him cute.The boys name is Avery, he had char-coal blank hair, dark brown eyes with slits of hazel in them. When they met they were instantly friends, everytime something bad happend to her he would always be there for her to make her happy. They end up growing up together for ten years. Ellie is now 17 and in her last year of highschoolsame withAvery but hes 18. Avery as you might have guessed ended up being the popular guy at school, gorgeous, friends with everyone,nice,funny,the usual, but Ellie well...lets just say she was a "late bloomer" and wasnt very looked upon in society. She hung out with the "wrong" crowd whatever that means, doing things she shouldnt be doing. Even though Avery knew everything about her (i know alittle creeper jk) he still talked to her, and they were still the best of friends. they have been friends for so long that it didnt matter what ppl thought about her or about him hanging out with her.Ever since they were little he liked her and still does but the thing is he might even...love her. But something happened after school when Ellie was home; her father came home early that

day..completely wasted.


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