Chapter 1: Sigh up for: The Magical World of Orin

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

Reads: 586
Comments: 17

Okay read the summery please! if you did thank you.

Anyhow, I want you all to take part in my story (You will get Credit for your Character on my profile page).

First off let me know their name and what kind of raise your Character is (From humans-to-Dragons or any other Magical creature).

Next let me know their Gender (Male or female or both).

Age is important (1 to 999,999, 999 You can be as old as you want).

Skin color (What is the color of your Character?).

Hair and (If you have any hair) your Character's eye color.

Let me know what your Character is wearing.

Does your Character have any family?

Whatis your character's relationshipwith the main character. (Friend, enemy, Cousin/Uncle/Aunt, etc...)

What class are you? (Knight, Mage, Rogue, etc....).

If you have a love interest for a Character already in the story let me know and I might make him/her your true love!

?What are your powers if you have any and you can't have super strong moves like stopping time or killing someone by just poking then in the shoulder.

?Do you have a pet? (Cat? Dog?.....Dragon? etc...)

?Are you Evil or good?

?And finally your Character's background and how you end up meeting the main Character (Ivy)

example!

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Name: Ivy (Don't put your real name)

Raise: Half Dragon, human

?Gender: Female

?Age: Fifteen

?Skin: White

?Hair and eyes: Short brown hair, Light blue eyes

Clothes:

Home: White maid uniform, white hair band that keeps Mind readers from reading her mind. Long white tail and horns that are hidden by two white ribbons in her hair.

?Out: Yellow short, White tank top, yellow ribbons that hide her horns, and white traveling shoes. Same head band.

?Family: Ash (Brother) RT (Mother) Elder Orin (Father)

?Ivy is the main Character.

?Class: Healer and Mage

?Love Interest: Prince Castiel

Powers: Healing, shielding with barriers, Fire attacks, ice attacks, water attacks, and Wind attacks.

Pet: Small little kitten named Craft, that is pitch black with Purple markings of witchcraft on it's body. Craft can turn into a huge black tiger with the same purple markings and purple eyes. He was a gift from the Prince.

?Ivy is on the good side. (Fighting for the King)

?Ivy was a maid of the King. She was poor and had to take care of her fourteen year old sick brother, Ash on her own. She is not as smart, but she is very good with magic. Her father was a dragon named Orin and her mother was a Witch, Named RT, AKA Rose Thorn. Her brother was a full human, but had the powers of fire, but he was too sick to use it. Ivy ends up Catching the eye of Prince Castiel. Both of them are too shy to admit that they love each other. Ivy ends up having to travel the world to unlock the secrets of Orin and RT after her brother is kidnapped by an angry Giant named Spar. Along the way she meets many new friends and foes. Ivy must find her brother, but what happens when good times go wrong?.....

?There that's Ivy! Now what's you Character?


Submitted: May 18, 2012

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star seeker

ill help you with this story but im very busy so keep me posted.

Fri, May 18th, 2012 5:21pm

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Sure thing!

Fri, May 18th, 2012 12:20pm

Twinkletoeslover

Name: Nichole
raised by: her parents in an elete clan of werewolfs
Gender:female
skin: tan and muscualer (for a girl)
Hair: black curls
eyes: Bright green
fur color: pearl white
clothes: a purple tank top and jeans
Family: they disowned her
class: Rouge
powers: can change into a human at will
love interest: a vampire that was mindwashed into being evil(she doesnt know where he is)
Backround: She was hunting one day when she stumbled apon a hurt vampire whos name was jesse. She was about to kill him but instead ended up falling in love with him.they met in secret each night. One day there was a battle between the vampires and werewolves. They faught but jesse ended up saving nichole from his best friend. Her clan saw this and she was kicked out. So was jesse but they didnt mind. Soon nichole came pregnaunt with jesses child and they couldnt have been hapier when all of a sudden they were attacked by giants and jesse was brain washed by a giant. he turned on nichole and beat her almost to death. when it was all over jesse was gone and the child in her stomahch was dead. she cried for many days. she grew thin and weak. one day when she was trying to hunt she found ivy and thought she would be a good meal. so she pounced on her but since she was so weak ivy was abke to pin her against the ground when she was in her wolf form.
thats my caractor if you have any queistions just ask



Fri, May 18th, 2012 7:08pm

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Thsnk you so much for fanning me and being part of my story! I'll let you know when the story is up.

Fri, May 18th, 2012 12:19pm

AutumnKalaway

name:Cloe
Age:same as ash
gender: female
Raised" she was raised a fairy
powers: can grow all types of plants, and flowers change colors according to her mood
clothes: A grass skirt and top made all out of nature
looks: White blonde straight hair and bright blue eyes
Skin color; tan
Class: healing
Family: Doesnt have none
love intereat: Ash
backround; when cloe was younger were wolfs broke into her home and killed her parents. If it wasnt for ash saving her she would have been dead. she still has a scar on her rist from the bite of one of them. now she s a gardener for the king but goes with ivy beacuse thier frineds and she was to save ash

Sat, May 19th, 2012 4:47am

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okay, btw Ash is fourteen. He has short brown hair and light blue eye's like Ivy.

Sat, May 19th, 2012 7:32am

ShreyaSen11

WOW, this is cool!! Okay, here goes!!
Name: Violet
Raise: Half Dragon, Human (sorry, I am not copying the model paper but I already had a character in mind before I read it so.......:P)
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Skin Color: Fair with a dragon symbol on her right arm.
Hair and Eyes: Long dark brown hair with bright purple eyes.
Clothes: Home: A white T-shirt with a blue mini-skirt and white slippers
Outside: A sleeveless white top with blue shorts and a blue half-jacket with white sneakers.
Family: Ivy's long lost sister, the Dragon who brought her up, no one else is there who she might consider as family.
Class: Rogue (Like Robin Hood, for a good cause)
Love interest: Another Rogue named Astor; White hair with teal eyes. Nature: Normally grumpy and quiet but for Violet, he softens up.
Powers: Can control the elements Fire, water and ice ( can make swords out of them and fight OR can kill them alive by burning/drowning/freezing them)
Pet: None
Nature: Tomboy, HATES to be the damsel in distress.
Background: Her parents could not afford to keep two children and abandoned her in the woods and kept Ivy with them. There, she was found by a Dragon named Draconis who brought her up after taking pity on her and had bestowed her with dragon powers, a result of the mark on her right arm. She had to lead her life as a rogue with few of her friends who were also rogues and whatever they stole from the over-rich officers, they used to give 50% of it to poor villagers. She meets Ivy when Ivy is sent by the king on a mission to catch the rogues who have been stealing from his officials.
Well!! Thats all!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! I hope you liked Violet!!! KMU!!

































Sun, May 20th, 2012 2:47pm

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Violet can be Ivy's sister, but Ivy's family is:

Father: Elder Orin (Light Dragon)
Mother: RT (Rose Thorn) (Witch)(Died)
Brother: Ash (Human)

Every thing else is perfect thinks for signning up.

Sun, May 20th, 2012 2:50pm

ShreyaSen11

Oh!! I forgot to say!! Violet's hair is kept in Twin tails or a pony tail and she is a child prodigy!!

Sun, May 20th, 2012 2:50pm

Author
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Okay thanks a bunch,

Sun, May 20th, 2012 2:46pm

ShreyaSen11

and she is on the good side!! Gosh!! I have NO IDEA why I keep forgetting things!! So sorry!!

Sun, May 20th, 2012 2:53pm

Author
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It's okay.

Sun, May 20th, 2012 2:45pm

Natsfreewill

Hello I would love to join in to your story, here I go

Name: Elizabeth
Gender: female
Age:18
Hair color: light brown, with a turquoise and orange highlights in her lower part of her long hair and a bit in her bang that is kept side way.
Skin color: white, she has a scar in her neck that looks like a rose.
Eye color: Hazel (blue, gray, yellow, light green and aquamarine)
Race: She's half human and half unknown( she discovers such a thing later)
Class: Assasin
Love interest: not so sure but u can put one for her if u want :3
Clothes: Home: A white plaid dress not so elegant, and snickers ( she doesn't care how she looks as long as she's comfortable, with her long hair tide up in a pony tail.
Out: A black leather long jacket, those for combat, red and white stripes strapless, a school girl mini skirt, also black , some red leather hand gloves ( all her killer gears are hidden in her jacket, weird things can happen in a story, hehe) black long combat boots that reach a lil bit up from her knees, her favorite waist chains.
Family: none
Powers:She have all her skills from martial arts, good with night vision ( animal instincts to be precise), and some holy power she doesn't know how to use, cause she doesn't know she have those powers.
Background: She was found as a baby in a orphanage and she was adopted by the boss of an secret association called Stallion Cross ( association to kill important people and kings), she was the only one who mastered all the tricks and secrets about becoming an professional Assasin and is being mocked by being a girl, specially by a boy named Cain, who had some slight interest in her, She was born from a fallen Archangel and a human mother, as she inherit her father's power that for her is unknown. One boring and chilling cold night she is sent to kill Violet and was found by Ivy, she tried to kill Ivy and her sister but her mission failed, she came back to Ivy one night as well but this time it was to plead for forgiveness and to join her in her quest, along the time she tries to modify her nature, Cain is in the outlook to find her knowing she wasn't death, 'cause the one to kill her was him ( maybe bound her to him forever?, who knows?)
Nature: She is calm until someone gets in her nerves( she acts in instinct so watch out for her Kunai knives), sometimes cheerful when in the mood and she is always writting in a little notebook of her. She's a tomboy by nature and acts like she doesnt care but she is soft hearted inside.

I like your idea and I would gladly want to join in!, I love inuyasha a lot toooo, he is my first love since 6 grade, I would gladly be happy if you to read some of my story I'm writting ( I wrote it in Spanish but now is being translate to English so soon I will update it here) and thanks for reading my comment I'll wait for ur reply!

Fri, May 25th, 2012 9:17pm

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Thanks for joining. She'll come later in the chapters

Fri, May 25th, 2012 2:32pm

Within The Heart

It was Race not race not raised

Sat, May 26th, 2012 5:22am

Within The Heart

okay people I'm not taking any more until then you can still send in characters, but those characters will only be minor characters until i change my mind they will stay minor characters, okay well until then
~WithinTheHeart

Mon, June 4th, 2012 5:01pm

Within The Heart

Okay I'm putting Ivy and Castiel's new clothes here!

Ivy: Short black jacket with bo sleeves over a strapless white belly shirt. On her arms are long white mitts (The long gloves without the fingers in them) She wears black jean shorts with long white socks. Her footwear are black ankel boots. Around her waist is a yellow puoch that she keeps her coins, necklace, and other inportant things in. Her hair is a little longer and on her head is a white bandanna. Her hair is let down, but is tied back by a white and black striped hair tie.

Castiel: He is wearing a blue sleeveless jacket that reaches down a little past his knees. Under the jacket is a tight black shirt with long sleeves. He wears long blue pants with black sneakers. His hair is down to his shoulders and is straight, but wavy at the ends. On his back is a brown back pack. He still wears the small whisle around his neck.

Sun, August 26th, 2012 3:53am

Ienzo Darkness

Ok,so what? People can still send in characters,except the characters will only be minor?

Sun, August 26th, 2012 5:29am

Author
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Yes. If you'd like to cearte a character I'd love to use them and maybe in the future he/she would become a main.

Sun, August 26th, 2012 12:41am

Natsfreewill

Allr

Sun, August 26th, 2012 1:53pm

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k

Mon, August 27th, 2012 12:13pm

Natsfreewill

Sorry fast typing, well let's see what I can do here, she is still wearing her long leather jacket but this leather jacket has a hoody,
under her jacket she now wears a white tank top and under the tank top she wears a gray semi long shirt that the hem reach to her elbows, she changes her skirt to wear long military baggy pants white, gray and soft blue are the patterns, and changes her black combat boots, to gray ones, she dorsn't wear her gloves anymore and now she always carry on her neck her father's necklace, as she grows fond o the gang her necklace opens out o the blue, but the scene i'll leave it to you and she realized it wasn't her mother's but her dad. She cut her hair elbow lenght boyish style in her bang.

Cain: Hmmm he wears his favorite lanky combat jacket that is broken the hems of the shoulders, he let his hair come back to his original color that is black, he wears black leather pants with a big blade that e carry in his back and his weapons are hidden, isntead of wearing boots he wears converse, tell me if he appears ok?,

oh and chapter 5 of an assasssin's destiny is being written im just to busy to put it up fast since thwir givig me school work and im sick..., thanks for telling me about this :), good luck on ur next chapter :D

Sun, August 26th, 2012 2:10pm

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thanks i will

Sun, August 26th, 2012 7:52am

ShreyaSen11

Okay, I'm putting Violet's and Astor's clothes here!!

Violet: She now wears a sleeveless white collard shirt which ends 2 inches above her stomach. Just where the collar ends, there is a small dragon shaped cut (where a tie would normally sit). She also wears a simple red and blue tie which has dragon markings all over. The tie reaches till her belly button. Her white shorts remain the same, only now, paired with a a blue and red loose belt. She wears ankle length white boots with one boot having a blue dragon running down the side and the other with a red dragon running down the side. Her hair is now put in two high ponytails with having blue and red highlights.

Astor: He now wears black skinny jeans with a chain paired with a white full sleeved muscle shirt. His hoody is now black and has blue details at the base. The hood is kept down and the zip is kept open. His hair has blue highlights in them now. He also wears black shoes.

Hope you like it!!

Sun, August 26th, 2012 2:57pm

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okay thanks!

Sun, August 26th, 2012 8:05am

someoneawesome

Would you mind if I made a person? and I wouldn't care if they were minor character.

Thu, January 3rd, 2013 5:32am

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sure no prob just tell me his/her info

Thu, January 3rd, 2013 8:30am

someoneawesome

Okay first I have a few questions 1. Is it okay if I do two different people? So you know I can get there two different personality. 2. Also is it fine if one of them is Ren's little sister? 3. What age would she be I was thinking along the lines of 6,7,8 (you can choose) 4. Is telekenises to strong of a power? Okay that's all my questions I was just asking to make sure oky doky thanks.

Fri, January 4th, 2013 7:38pm

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Ren had two younger siblings who i think i only mentioned once in heart of stone. A brother and sister. i never really picked what age they r or what they looked like. i think she would be much older. But they were killed by elder snowy. theirdeaths including their parents is what made ren kill dragons. I think i can bring his sister back. Say snowy thought she killed her but didnt i guess. Give meher info and ill think about it. She would be ten now i guess yess to the other questions

Sat, January 5th, 2013 3:31pm

someoneawesome

'kay thanks a bundle :)

Name: Dante
Gender: male
Age: 17
Race: Half-dragon(well hes more like 1 quarter of a dragon)
Skin color: white
Hair and eye color: white-ish blue-ish hair that goes to his chin and covers one eye and his eyes are neon blue.
What he is wearing
at home he wears a pair of black sweats and a greey t-shirt and no shoes
out side he wears a white t-shirt and white skinny jeans with a white leather jacket and the two swords he uses at his sides and his red converse and a black backpack were he keeps all his stuff.
his family is his half sister who is always with him and elder snowy is his mom and i guess that means ren is his step brother and then rens dad is his step dad but he is dead.
His relationship hmm they can be friends like from the past or something.
class: he is a warrior and can heal just a little.
Love interest he doesn't have time for that with his little sister
powers healing and a little bit of ice and wind magic
pet none
he is good
and lastly his background he was always trying to impresshis mom but gave up when he had seen what she did to ren and his family he ran away with his little sister and never looked back. so how they meet i was thinking they could well her and her friends are lost so his little sister and him decide to help them find there way.
Okay lastly he kinda has problems with other dragons and since he has very little dragon in him he doesn't have any dragon features other then his eyes.

okay here is his little sister

Name: Kira
Gender female
Age: 10
Skin color: white
Race: human
Hair and eye color: hair is a long straight jet black and her eyes are purple
what she wears:
at home
a purple sweater and white leggings and a pair of slippers
out side
A black dress and a white sweater over it a pair of stockings and black ankle boots and she has her staff it looks like two dragons wrapping around each other and at the top they hold a orb which changes colors depending on what magic she uses.
Family Ren is her brother Dante is her half brother and her step mom is elder snowy and her dad id dead.
Realashionship she can look up at Ivy like a older sister like later on when they get to know each other better.
Class: Healer/mage
no love interest
Powers are she heals with earth magic but she can use the elements just a little she's working on improving them.
she has no pets but she has a habit of 'finding' animals and taking them but Dante makes her take them back to were she had stole them from
She is good Background she remembers hardly anything from her past so she doesn't ask she doesn't like elder snowy and is very shy and she wants to travle so when she goes running of she meets Ivy and offers to help her find her way.

okay thanks again and here is some other information Kira hardly speaks she nods shakes her head smiles or frowns but when she does speak its usally with Dante and they are always together and Kira runs off alot

okay i think thats it so if you have any questions fell free to ask.

Sun, January 6th, 2013 6:23pm

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okay great, but let's get the family think on track. So Kira's stepmom is elder snowy. Dante is her half brother and ren's her real brother? well Ren's dad and mom was killed by elder snowy. Ren's mom nor stepmom is not elder snowy, he hates her. does kira have the same parents as ren because he isn't half dragon and both his parents are dead. he has two siblings brother and sisters, so if kira is ren's full blood sister snowy can't be her stepmom. snowy had a daughter with a king named queen Live. live had princess sara and Prince Castiel. i don't have any children thought up for keth, oughroth, and mossaloth, so maybe instead of snowy, dante's father could be one of those three because snowy's children would be around 29. live is snowy's only child. How about pick one of those three dragon's to be their father and his mom would be the dead one, because ren is not related to snowy, so then that would make kira and dante not half siblings, they wouldn't be related at all, so that's why I didn't really want her to be ren's sister because it's confusing and snowy can't be dante's mom or he would be much older than he is now. maybe just have Kira and ren siblings and Dante can just be Kira's real close friends that they seem like siblings. everything else is perfect

Mon, January 7th, 2013 9:01am

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