Don't fall and leave me behind

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Memoir  |  House: Booksie Classic

Someone I've always loved
Decides to take drugs
And die's at a young age
And leaves me feeling unloved.

I Surrender

I’m  Defeated

Our Betrayal

My Retreat

My Forgiveness

Your Denial

Our Friendship

Won’t Go On For a While

That Knife

Another Life

Your Smile

Could win in a mile

That Hug

And that Drug

Beats us all

 You fall

Fall

Fall


Submitted: September 04, 2010

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Christian Taylor

I am really impressed! I really enjoyed this...excellent work! :)

Sat, September 4th, 2010 3:05pm

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Haha thank you again (:

Sat, September 4th, 2010 5:20pm

Liam Murray

really like that, its so simple and moving, you didnt even have to try hard! Well done!

Sun, September 5th, 2010 8:48am

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Haha thank you very much, it means alot to me...seriously (:

Sun, September 5th, 2010 1:49am

saoirse989

wow those so few words are really powerful :) Good job it's incred.

Tue, September 7th, 2010 3:56am

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Thank you (: I'm happy they mean something to you :) Do you pronounce your name as (sear-sha) xD

Mon, September 6th, 2010 11:44pm

saoirse989

your welcome! Haha yeah you do say it like that! - how did you know? hardly anyone gets it right! ;)

Tue, September 7th, 2010 3:43pm

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Haha, it's because I knew this girl but I didn't know if it was the way you say it. It's Irish right?

Wed, September 8th, 2010 5:00am

Capman

You write like me, and we both have to feel it.

Sat, September 18th, 2010 8:32am

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hmm thankyou (:

Sat, September 18th, 2010 8:10am

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