He Saved Me

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Chapter 36 (v.1)

Submitted: October 20, 2009

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Submitted: October 20, 2009



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Jake’s Pov~

Me and Jenn were driving to my private place, I never took anyone else, we were driving and talking about random things for about 2 hours then we finally came to the old dirt road that led to my grandparents house, they left it to me after they died.


“Ok Jake seriously where are you taking me?”


“Don’t worry Jenn, I think your going to like it if you can just wait”




We got to the house and Jenn’s jaw dropped, wow I thought she like it but not that much and she didn’t even see the inside.  I’m not going to lie it was a big beautiful house it was white with blue shutters and a balcony.


 “Wow Jake this is amazinging the yard is huge and the house is unbelievable, who lives here a millionaire?”


“No this is my house; my grandparents left it to me after they died”


“Oh I’m sorry”


“”Its ok come on lets get inside so I can get a fire going  and make some hot chocolate”


“Jake this house is right on the lake, is that why you wanted me to bring my bathing suit because your crazy if you think I’m going to go swimming in that”


“Know that’s not why, but I’ll show you why if we can hurry up and get inside.”


I took out my keys then grabbed her hand and led her to the door then picked her up bridal style and carried her in.


“You know that’s usually what married people do”


“I know but I wanted to be romantic”


“Well you succeed” she said.


Then kissed me, god I never thought kissing someone would be this good but with Jenn it was better then having sex with all the girls I slept with.  She pulled away and I put her down, she looked around with wide eyes.


“Jake this place is gorgeous”


“Yeah I know compliments of me grandmother she picked everything out and my grandfather built it.”


“Wow your so lucky you already have a house to live in”


“Yeah” I said while starting the fire and putting lots of wood on it.


“You can change into you bathing suit while I make hot chocolate”


“Alright but were do I get changed?”


“Down the hall first door on the left”




I made the hot chocolate with whip cream and chocolate sprinkles.  Jenn walked into the kitchen with just her bathing suit on o couldn’t help but stare. My breathing started to speed up.


“Jake what are you staring at”


“Your gorgeous”


“Pfft whatever”


I pulled her against me and kissed her long and slow.


“I mean it Jenn”


She blushed bright red and I was kinda surprised because I never did that toa girl they usually just giggled annoyingly.


“Here’s the hot chocolate, I’m going to change I’ll be back in a minute”




I came out of the bathroom a few minutes later, I took Jenn’s hand and led her upstairs to the master bedroom, into the bathroom where there was a hot tub.


“EEEk you have a hot tub”




“This is sick,” thank you

The house!!! http://images.rottentomatoes.com/images/movie/gallery/1133507/photo_04_hires.jpg

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