Not For Me, Not For You

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You’re my promise
I’m your wish
And this is how we’ll stay

Not For Me, Not For You

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You’re my white noise

I’m everything you’re not

and this is how we keep each other

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You’re still young

I’m still spring’s little teen

But, we want to rush things

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We have our ups and downs

They’re like pacific waves

They’re cold and sometimes they’re warm

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But, we still love and love

But, we still want to have and to hold

But, we're still together

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People say this love

Is not for me, not for you

Not for eternity


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But, they don’t understand

What it feels like to drown deep down in the heart

to drown deep in love

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We saw the darkest days

Most of them were Fridays

But, we got out

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They say this love

Is not for me, not for you

Not for eternity

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But, they don’t understand our weather

and they don’t know our seasons

and they can’t compare us

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We’ll write our own destiny on each other’s hands

We’ll make it through the stars

If that’s enough

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You’re my promise

I’m your wish

and this is how we'll stay

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Submitted: September 22, 2015

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LeeSchneider

I like this thing immensely. Beautiful poetry that I didn't know before. You have amazing ability to sketch characters in poetry. What you do is so inspiring and hertfelt.

Wed, September 23rd, 2015 4:43pm

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Ohhhh, thank you very much for such a beautiful comment!! Thanks for reading it too!!

Wed, September 23rd, 2015 10:43am

KosmicKollin

I really enjoyed this! I love the lines "But they don't understand our weather and they don't know our seasons" and "We'll write our own destiny on each others hands. We'll make it through the stars." Keep up the amazing work!

Fri, September 25th, 2015 9:10pm

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Thank you very much!!!

Fri, September 25th, 2015 3:25pm

LeParadisNoirPoetique

You have an canny ability to write about emotions, and make your poems different each time. You put alot of reality into the people you are describing, and you bring them to life easily, making it look lime we are watching a film when reading your poems.
These are moments when you want to rush life when you are young, but you have your whole lives for this, so people will try to interfere. I love the rebellion aspect to that here.
Your words are lines to describe what is going on is beautiful, and this is moving and heartfelt for when 2 people just want to be together.
"You're my promise, I'm your wish, and this is how we'll stay" this is very beautiful, and the words that make love immortal. Well done on an amazing, heartwarming piece Yulia.

Sat, September 26th, 2015 8:48pm

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Thank you very much for saying that....Thank you!!!

Sat, September 26th, 2015 4:14pm

Randhir Kaur

Vry nicely penned.

Mon, October 5th, 2015 2:21pm

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Thanks!

Mon, October 5th, 2015 11:41am

Areen Abukishek

Lovely and beautiful

Wed, October 21st, 2015 7:20pm

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thanks!

Mon, October 26th, 2015 7:03am

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