That's What

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Most of my stuff is kinda dark, but when you look at what happens in this world it is not that far from what the whole world is, the world is a dark place to live in so with my writing I fell right at home, and that told you completely nothing about this at all. (my bad).

~ZS~

That's What

Tell me how you feel

Tell me all your fears are real

I see the fear in your hazel eyes

I can tell that you just want to die

I can't see the reason why

You have everything, you say you have nothing

You have no idea how i feel

That's what she said

I need a way out

That's what she cried

I want off this hell ride

That's what she yelled

Tell me honey, Is it money

Is that what you need

Tell me baby

Don't make me blead

Don't let my heart bleed

I thought you were what I needed

That's what she said

I thought I could make it

That's what she cried

I just can't take it

That's what she yelled

I found her bleeding

She lost the time she was needing

A lost soul, a bleeding heart

Who would have thought that she would go

Her end, to me it was just the start.

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~Zero Saint~

Submitted: June 18, 2009

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Laughingwanderer

Wow. That was powerful...

Fri, June 19th, 2009 7:27pm

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Thanks for taking the time to read it.

~ZS~

Sat, June 20th, 2009 6:21pm

Imperfect Perfection

That was sad but kinda sounded just like what a friend of mine went through (a friend I have not seen in awhile)
oh yeah sorry I like it it was written really well, it was deep and yeah very powerful.

Mon, June 29th, 2009 3:22am

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Thanks for ur kind words and thanks for reading a little of my stuff.

~ZS~

Sun, June 28th, 2009 8:27pm

bigsissy13

omg. i am literally at a loss for words. this was very well written and very emotional. you really have a talent. this was by far one of the best poems i've read. and i've read a lot of poetry. excellent job. very strong writer.

Sun, September 5th, 2010 2:24pm

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thanks man!,,, for reading and ya comment

Thu, October 28th, 2010 1:35am