Topic: New Book by Myself, Joshua Alexander

Hey I'd like some feedback on a book I published a couple weeks ago. Just a simple comment on the first couple chapters or maybe the whole book (that'd be amazing even though its only 23 pages) telling me what you thought would be great. I kinda joined this House for that exact reason and if I get feedback then I'll definitely stay here and give feedback to anyone who reads and comments on my book. Thanks!