Topic: new to Booksie, looking for readers/commenters
Hi there. I entered the first chapter contest, and have been slowly adding to the book. It's still a work in progress, but I could use some constructive criticism, anything. tone style, voice, whatever you'd like to comment on, by all means, just make it constructive. Comments like , This is good, I like it, this sucks donkey b****, etc aren't really helpful. Anyway, thanks for your time.