Simple Reviews (Page 2 of 4)

I reviewed both poems of KatV

I'd love it if someone could review chapter three of my novel 'Weight of the Heart'

I have reviewed the first chapter of Stories for a Rainy Day.  It was excellent.  I really think you should give it a read.  The emotions it made me feel, wow.

If someone could please review the second chapter to my new book I'm writing "Reign of Lies" it would be much appreciated.

Just read FAIRY-ELF ENIGMA BOOK 1 and may check back for more later. Looking for someone to read two chapters. They are from the same WIP, but I'm curious what impression they leave together if anything.

https://www.booksie.com/638613-new-york … -chapter-4

Then later this occurs

https://www.booksie.com/638613-new-york … -chapter-7

So the  4th and 7th chapters in the book but each chapter is designed to stand alone for the most part.

Thanks!

Hi! I read through Lucinda Amare's chapter 4, and I loved it! I've been reading through 'The Weight Of The Heart' and have really enjoyed it so far, this chapter was no exception! I loved some of the detailed description, and I'm really looking forward to reading through the next few chapters! One thing I would suggest, is that I found a cliché in your writing, and think you might be able to come up with a more powerful metaphor? There is nothing wrong with having clichés, but I think that by replacing the phrase 'a real feast for the eyes' with something slightly less cliché, it could improve the sentence. Overall, a great read and I would HIGHLY recommend!

I would love if someone could review chapter 2 of my novel 'The Demon I've Become'

Thanks!
Lily

I reviewed 'Polyester Blonde', a funny little story that I recommend everyone here to read!
If the next person could review my newest short story 'Memento', that would be just lovely. Thanks!

I reviewed ThatGreenWriter's poem 'The Little Blonde Boy' and I'd encourage to give the cute poem a try. It's worth reading and I loved it. It'd be great if the next person could read my poem 'The Sinusoidal Resolutions'.  Thanks a ton!

I reviewed the first chapter of Rhetters "Love Blade".  I'd be happy with a review of any of my works.

I reviewed shika's poem 'To love or be loved?' It was a wonderful poem ............

Can the next person please review my poem 'Never Give up' ?
https://www.booksie.com/657604-never-give-up

-Thanks a lot

I read and review Without you: Chapter 4. Nice and heart-touching poem. I really enjoyed the poem Shri.
It would be great the next person reviews one of the following essays.
The Dark and The Night - https://www.booksie.com/657596-the-dark-and-the-night
The scene - https://www.booksie.com/656234-the-scene
Thank you!

I’ve read the short piece about the beauty of Sri Lanka by DiyaSL, ‘The Beauty Island’

Since this is simple reviews I’d be happy to get a comment on anything I’ve written.
Thanks

I reviewed all the chapters of Nikappuhamy's 'Again! Everything is New!'. I hope Nishi will find my review helpful.
It would be my pleasure, if someone glances at any of my works, and comments on it.
Thanks in advance