If you're looking to have your work critiqued, give some information about it here, including the genre (if it has one), a synopsis, and what problems you specifically want to have looked at. Post a link to your work at the end of it.
Note that critiques are more indepth than reviews. They look at setting, plot, characters on a finer level than a review, which comments, mainly, on the overall work. Critiques should focus on language use in addition to how the story works as a whole.
A critique is a critical assessment, whereas a review is a formal evaluation. In a critique, focus on what is strong and weak, and not specifically what you like or dislike. Note where the writing can be improved, or where it was effective.
It's useless to say, "I like this" because writers are looking for ways to improve. They want to know why, not that you do (at least not for a critique).