Topic: constructive criticism
Guten Tag euch allen.
Hi writing light novel, I do not care if people are good at editing stuff; I need to get ideas about how to improve the story.
I am writing a Japanese fiction light novel so you write them in the present tense unless you are talking about the past. So if you read it and wish to give advice please remember that part//// thank you for your time
https://www.booksie.com/602746-gaia-las … -immortals
If you have something you like someone to read, let me know. I would love to help.