Topic: Read for Read?

Hello! I'm Boris smile I was wondering if anyone in here would be interested in checking out the first two chapters ofmy book and giving me some feedback! They are currently drafts right now, but I'm still looking for all the feedback/encouragement I can get haha! It's called The Schulptor's Knife, and it;s realistic fiction about a high school senior named Ashton. He starts out kind of dreamy and not very connected to reality, but he starts to get more lucid when he meets a rag-tag group of artistic outcasts. And, as his life starts to change, Ashton begins to become more and more obsessed with control.
Here's the link!: https://www.booksie.com/609315-the-sculptors-knife
If anyone checks it out, I'd be more than happy to return the favor! Thanks! big_smile