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I have reviewed Arcturus' story Moral Compass.  It is very interesting, and quite unique.  I highly recommend people to check it out.  I was hoping someone could give me a review on my new book, Reign of Lies.  Thank you.

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I reviewed AmateurWriter's "Reign of Lies"; a very interesting, enjoyable read.  Will the next person please read one of my poems, "Life Unbalanced" or "Autumn".

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I reviewed both poems of KatV smile

I'd love it if someone could review chapter three of my novel 'Weight of the Heart' smile

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I reviewed chapter three of “Weight of the Heart.” I would appreciate it if someone could choose a short story to review from “Stories for a Rainy Day,” or drop a review for a chapter out of “Reina” (temporary title). The choice is yours! smile

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I have reviewed the first chapter of Stories for a Rainy Day.  It was excellent.  I really think you should give it a read.  The emotions it made me feel, wow.

If someone could please review the second chapter to my new book I'm writing "Reign of Lies" it would be much appreciated.

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I read Rein of Lies Chapters 1 and 2 https://www.booksie.com/640613-reign-of-lies-chapter-2 . AW1 has a really great setting, and the promise of an intriguing plot. The characters are vibrant and likeable.

Feel free to read chapter 1 of FAIRY-ELF ENIGMA BOOK1 https://www.booksie.com/631814-fairy-el … -chapter-1 and let me know what you think.

I will also do reviews for anyone who asks, happily. You don't need to read my work.

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Just read FAIRY-ELF ENIGMA BOOK 1 and may check back for more later. Looking for someone to read two chapters. They are from the same WIP, but I'm curious what impression they leave together if anything.

https://www.booksie.com/638613-new-york … -chapter-4

Then later this occurs

https://www.booksie.com/638613-new-york … -chapter-7

So the  4th and 7th chapters in the book but each chapter is designed to stand alone for the most part.

Thanks!

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I reviewed both of Susan Donovan's chapters.

I'd love it for something to review chapter four of Weight of the Heart.
I translated my Dutch book but half this chapter is all new. It's about the first time my MC's see each other after my male MC rescued the female MC from her assaulters who beat her up so bad that he never knew what her face looked like.

https://www.booksie.com/638994-weight-o … -chapter-4

Please be nice (but honest)... and thanks ^_^

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Hi! I read through Lucinda Amare's chapter 4, and I loved it! I've been reading through 'The Weight Of The Heart' and have really enjoyed it so far, this chapter was no exception! I loved some of the detailed description, and I'm really looking forward to reading through the next few chapters! One thing I would suggest, is that I found a cliché in your writing, and think you might be able to come up with a more powerful metaphor? There is nothing wrong with having clichés, but I think that by replacing the phrase 'a real feast for the eyes' with something slightly less cliché, it could improve the sentence. Overall, a great read and I would HIGHLY recommend!

I would love if someone could review chapter 2 of my novel 'The Demon I've Become'

Thanks!
Lily smile

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I've read 'The Demon I've Become' Could the next person please review any story of mine.
Thanks very much!

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I reviewed 'Polyester Blonde', a funny little story that I recommend everyone here to read!
If the next person could review my newest short story 'Memento', that would be just lovely. Thanks!

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I reviewed 'Memento' by Arcturus, and I recommend it to anyone trying to overcome writer's block, as I really enjoyed it! If the next person could review my story 'The Little Blonde Boy' I would very much appreciate it!

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I reviewed ThatGreenWriter's poem 'The Little Blonde Boy' and I'd encourage to give the cute poem a try. It's worth reading and I loved it. It'd be great if the next person could read my poem 'The Sinusoidal Resolutions'.  Thanks a ton!

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I’ll read shika’s poem. Could someone please take a look at my story “Love’s Blade” and leave a comment? I’m wondering if my first chapter is lacking.

https://www.booksie.com/638608-loves-blade

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I reviewed the first chapter of Rhetters "Love Blade".  I'd be happy with a review of any of my works.

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I reviewed XCulletto's short story 'It's a girl.' It was a lovely story guaranteed to keep the reader engaged in nail-biting moments. It'd be great if someone could review my poem 'To love or be loved?' https://www.booksie.com/657578-to-love- … test-entry

Thanks a ton!

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I reviewed shika's poem 'To love or be loved?' It was a wonderful poem ............

Can the next person please review my poem 'Never Give up' ?
https://www.booksie.com/657604-never-give-up

-Thanks a lot smile

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I reviewed diyaSL's poem 'Never Give up'. It was very inspirational.

I'll be glad if someone reviews my poem 'Without You'.
https://www.booksie.com/656684-the-gran … -chapter-4

Thank you very much smile

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I read and review Without you: Chapter 4. Nice and heart-touching poem. I really enjoyed the poem Shri.
It would be great the next person reviews one of the following essays.
The Dark and The Night - https://www.booksie.com/657596-the-dark-and-the-night
The scene - https://www.booksie.com/656234-the-scene
Thank you!

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I reviewed Nikappuhamy's essay, 'The Dark and the Night'. That was well written.

I would be glad if someone could review my essay https://www.booksie.com/656506-the-beauty-island
Thanks

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I’ve read the short piece about the beauty of Sri Lanka by DiyaSL, ‘The Beauty Island’

Since this is simple reviews I’d be happy to get a comment on anything I’ve written.
Thanks

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I read 'Pencil Case' and 'Night Magic' by Lucas.. Both the contents are very beautiful..

I invite the next person to have a look at any of my writings and leave a comment.. smile

Thank you! big_smile

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I reviewed all the chapters of Nikappuhamy's 'Again! Everything is New!'. I hope Nishi will find my review helpful.
It would be my pleasure, if someone glances at any of my works, and comments on it.
Thanks in advance smile

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I've read Poetshri's work, could the next person please read my story 'Rolling Hills'
Thanks!

https://www.booksie.com/posting/archia/ … lls-656434

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I left a simple review for the Short story 'Rolling Hills' by Archia. It was a nice, flash-fiction story. The picture was well described in it.
I would be glad if the next person could read my poem 'Life Goes On' which I wrote for the recently organized review chain contest.
https://www.booksie.com/658682-life-goes-on

-Thank you in advance smile