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I read and reviewed short story The Bargain of Death by Poetshri. It was a good horror tale with a hint of a deadly sin.

I would really appreciate it if someone could read my poem depression

https://www.booksie.com/663174-depression

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FromBlackToViloet wrote:

I read and reviewed short story The Bargain of Death by Poetshri. It was a good horror tale with a hint of a deadly sin.

I would really appreciate it if someone could read my poem depression

https://www.booksie.com/663174-depression

I read and reviewed the poem listed above. (Feel free to take my words with a grain of salt, FromBlackToViolet, the same as any feedback.)

If someone could read and review the sample first chapter of my novel "Different Vessels," I would be grateful. Strangely enough, it's my most read work here on Booksie according to stats, but unlike most everything else still has no reviews.

https://www.booksie.com/661150-differen … st-chapter

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I reviewed the first chapter of the novel Different Vessels by Jonathan Lee. It would be great if someone reviews my short story A Night at the Morgue. Thank you in advance. smile


https://www.booksie.com/656134-ghost-st … chapter-26

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I reviewed "A Night at the Morgue" by Poetshri. If someone could review the first chapter of a story I experimented with a while ago called "The Grasping Wastes", I would really appreciate it. (Warning; blood and profanity). https://www.booksie.com/651749-the-grasping-wastes

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I read and reviewed G.P.Sharp. "The Grasping Wastes", (Warning; blood and profanity). It was a good horror poem, you may go thru torture, but giving up your name is probably the worst of all.

When someone gets the time, could someone please review my short story

A blooming red thread

https://www.booksie.com/663983-a-blooming-red-thread

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I reviewed Violet's short story A Blooming Red Thread. I loved the way the anxiety issue was presented. Will someone please review my short story. Thanks in advance. smile


https://www.booksie.com/656447-10-secon … chapter-25

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I reviewed Shri short story 10 second short story about the mongol leader, brought me back to a blood thirsty topic in history class. It was impactful in the end.

I would really appreciate if someone could please read and review my second chapter called Calla Lilac. Just a quick summary: The main girl is a half human and half vampire. Chapter 2 shows like her inner monologue for almost biting her crush and walking back home alone at night. And the there's community of vampires that wants her to join their elite vampire coven where she meets a certain someone.

https://www.booksie.com/659273-calla-lilac-chapter-2

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I've reviewed FromBlacktoViloet's, Calla Lilac, Chapter 2. A little cliche for a vamp story but enjoyable. Needs some editing to make it shine. Might need to read more to see if there's more than meets the eye.

I would love some extra input on this little gem of a story I'm developing. https://www.booksie.com/652884-space-samurai

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I reviewed A. K.Taylor's Space Samurai. It was a very enjoyable read, and I had a lot of fun reviewing it. It has potential in its early stages.
I recently submitted this for a contest and I would love to know what people think. It's called The Great Game, a story about a group of friends who are mysteriously transported to a fantasy realm of their own making....
https://www.booksie.com/665909-the-great-game

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I reviewed Jon Nathaniel's The Great Game.  I liked it, it was interesting and entertaining.  Written in an imaginative way, and even though I don't really read fantasy much, this person is definitely a good writer.  Couldn't really find anything wrong with it imo.
My little short story for review takes place in 1300's Scotland, a romantic rendezvous between a knight and his lady, slightly erotic (define slightly! lol)
  https://www.booksie.com/663382-fire-and-sweetness

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I reviewed Kenneth Lapointe short story Fire and sweetness. It's a scandalous tale of a lady and her knight. The writer did a marvelous job making me feel like I was back in the medieval times with the polished dialogue and the imagery. I'm a sucker for romance.

When someone gets a chance, could someone please read my short story Thanks in advanced

https://www.booksie.com/665961-drinking-your-own-poison

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I have reviewed FromBlackToViloet's short story. It's a beautifully dark description about chugging down a drink or two in the bar. The imagery transports you to this vivid, strong, and in-control person who seems independent. A scenery well made.

I would love if someone could review any one of my works.
https://www.booksie.com/portfolio-view/ … ujh-298587

Thanks in advance!

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I reviewed Nikita Ahujh's "Time to Breakup". It is a beautiful poem, and I had a great time reading it and processing it.

If someone could review my new chapter of my novel, "The Great Game", I would very much appreciate it.
https://www.booksie.com/665909-the-great-game-chapter-2

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I read the first chapter of Unfortunate Souls by FromBlackToViolet. It is a very interesting concept, and I'm excited to see where it goes.

If someone could review my short story Fiddler's Green that would be awesome. I submitted it for Arachia's most recent contest.

https://www.booksie.com/672467-fiddlers-green

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I read and reviewed  Jon short story of Fiddler's Green. It's a whimsical and colorful Fiddler on a roof dream world you should check out. When someone gets the time, could someone please check out this second chapter of my chapter Unfortunate souls. She came from a circus and wants to know the truth about her father from the caravan of a fortune teller.

Thanks:}

https://www.booksie.com/671057-unfortun … -chapter-2